Potential (For Kids Who Need Elevation w/ Potential)
 

i got potential but i need alittle elevation.

LoL, alrite.. but u must be active iight????

well i'm active.

lol..iight, but keep battlin non stop also cuz thats wut will help u elevate alot

ok but i might lose some and win some but i wanna pick my offenderz right. dont wanna pick the wrong people.

ayo...i guess ill try out....i wanted to be in the regular forum as The "God of Vocab"....but no one is posting a yes or no...

aight i mind check my new battle wit logistic thats aanother dope verse.

i got potential, but im in 50th Brigade and im workin on a side crew.... i could drop the side crew, but u gotta understand, im only usin this 4 practice.... prolly aint stayin here 4ever... ima just drop my verse of my open mic. its longer than 10 lines, but fuck it....

now im not normally a violent person, unless u give me a reaspn/
but if u pop shit about me, ill shoot u, even if bitch aint in season/
so just cause im a woman dont mean i cant b violent/
in such a sick world, multiple gunshots wont even make media silent/
its like murder is a game, like a sport or a hobby/
hundreds of ppl git killed everyday, but my song aint about 2 git sobby/
i aint tryin 2 preach, i got 2 much of a backround/
but in my case, if rappin effects were like wrestlin, my lyrics a smackdown/
ive been thru tough times, haters hatin my shit/
drugs, sex, and violence, emotional relationships/
bitch u know im talkin bout u, so dont fuckin deny it/
my records out n exposed, so u cant just hide my shit/
u raped me bitch, made me pay 4 my own abortion 2/
but u aint gittin away with this im out 2 torture u/
who woulda known id grow up 2 b such a lyrical genius/
date such a fag, slice off both balls from his penis/
dangle his dick right in front of his face (ha ha!)/
am i suckin hard enough now?! blast fuckin semen all over the place/
cmon, bitch, wanna take advatnage of me now? grab my chest and use me 4 sex/
well i guess i aint got a choice, im 2 high 2 fight back, i knew i shoulda refused that X/
cause i hate u, y the fuck did i date u?/
i should rape u, all iwanted was a thank u/
i did so much shit for u, u never took the time for a glance/
that bitch swingin her thong up in ur face, the hos got u in trance/
do i not mean shit 2 u? i thought that we were sumthin?/
but im stuck another night at home, naked, watchin ur body humpin/
im sick of bein white trash, its time 2 make a come back/
u gonna git ur nuts cracked, im more than just a big rack, boy ima make ur guts clap/
squirtin outta ur mouth, unless u watch the shit u speakin/
im cut all ur limbs off, we aint even close 2 the weekend/
so watch wut u say, else ur out 4 a bitch smack/
think im playin around, but u better just watch yo back!!!

holla when u reached a conclusion

damn girl nice wordplay but fuck no flow shit.

its a rough draft, i aint finished editing. i still need a chorus and bout 2 more verses, so im workin....

aight coo coo. shit check this.


people bite my rhymes all the fuckin time/
you versin me is a suicide sign/
girls love me they never ever decline/
thats a flow perfect three baar line. lol its dope right.

ah.............

ill just b nice and say "why yes"

well i'll jus be nice and say it was. it had flow i was givin youu an example.

ok.... but u still gots 2 work on ya wordpaly. boring shit.... 2 basic in my opinion