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Civil. 06-10-07 12:16 PM

Week 1: Ransum 0-0 .vs Ancel. 0-0
 
Battles Up Sunday
10-14 lines
Verses Due Friday
Voting Ends Sunday

Ancel. 06-10-07 02:10 PM

10 .

Ancel. 06-10-07 09:23 PM

see now...

Your expected to lose, so why the fuck would i bother with heat?
It's true he's got me in check...but my verses are outta his league
The battles close? man you couldnt get ya head out w/ any score
He's got it in the bag...which is why this bitch can't breathe anymore
They been downtalkin' your ass, you weak and bound to get bent
So take a break from the league...i'll even provide you the splint
Dont act all hard, we know you been pussy since u was born
Man if your tough...it's cause i accidentaly cooked you too long
SO THIS LINES FILLER YOU CANT PERFORM BITCH NIGGA WHAT??!
If we see you in square garden...because its where we throw our butts


quick 10 for you.

Ransum 06-12-07 07:21 PM

honestly,
i can tell ya faith is last... i'll take he's face and blast
with the AK that'll leave holes in hes grill like the Jason mask...
i'll Break'em fast.... hes verse aint recylable.. so what he makeing trash
then im skate'in fast... after the info spot'em.. it'll be hard to find'em like a jamican rash...
insted of spitting you should swallow like ya moms... she calls me the trout clogger
now she helps you wit ya history, got you rememberin 4 fathers....
i didnt want to do this now R.V gonna call me a noob basher
but i want you to realise!!... you cant see me like a-cup nude-flasher...
for christ shake i know its wrong... didnt need punchline he'll get done of a few riddles
cuz at the end of the day.... this fag'll just get's Berried like the new skittle's.... MOTHER FUCKAH....

YOU CANT FUCK WITH ME.... EZ!!!

Apartheid. 06-12-07 11:46 PM

v/ancel



all of ransum's lines were fuckin played, sorry son.

AND ROFL for being such a dumbfuck about "checking in" after you post...LMAO


omfg....

Titan 06-13-07 12:19 AM

The battles close? man you couldnt get ya head out w/ any score
He's got it in the bag...which is why this bitch can't breathe anymore
They been downtalkin' your ass, you weak and bound to get bent
So take a break from the league...i'll even provide you the splint
these were ok

Vs.

for christ shake i know its wrong... didnt need punchline he'll get done of a few riddles
cuz at the end of the day.... this fag'll just get's Berried like the new skittle's....
a little wordplay in this but it was barely Decent

ancel just came harder in this one it lookes to me, other dudes structure is fucked up..the jason mask line was the only other line u had that was meh..the rest were wack

V/Ancel

Dickard. 06-13-07 01:09 PM

The battles close? man you couldnt get ya head out w/ any score
He's got it in the bag...which is why this bitch can't breathe anymore

vs.

with the AK that'll leave holes in hes grill like the Jason mask...
i'll Break'em fast.... hes verse aint recylable.. so what he makeing trash

was closer than i honestly thought, but ancel came more consistant. Ransum good job man. You showed people your not joking around here And i like that. But a couple of ur lines were a bit played. But u still showed up and put up a fight.

/ancel

vafinest 06-13-07 02:19 PM

Your expected to lose, so why the fuck would i bother with heat?
It's true he's got me in check...but my verses are outta his league

They been downtalkin' your ass, you weak and bound to get bent
So take a break from the league...i'll even provide you the splint


vs


for christ shake i know its wrong... didnt need punchline he'll get done of a few riddles
cuz at the end of the day.... this fag'll just get's Berried like the new skittle's



this was a close battle here but I'm gonna have to go with ancel on this one.Yall came hard with yalls punches but I felt that ancel hit harder and weren't really played out.Ransum you did good on your half but there were alot of played concepts in your verse.But after reading both verses in this battle and I made my final descion and ancel gets my vote.


vote/ancel

Ransum 06-13-07 08:00 PM

ancel....

i see all of your RB buddys voted for you...

figuers....

only way u really won...

1

Ancel. 06-13-07 08:21 PM

wtf mystic voted for me too, i wasnt gonna say shit but your verse blew nuts man. you really suck at text battling, quit while your ahead.

Antonio Banderas 06-13-07 08:29 PM

Your expected to lose, so why the fuck would i bother with heat?
It's true he's got me in check...but my verses are outta his league
Nice opener

The battles close? man you couldnt get ya head out w/ any score
He's got it in the bag...which is why this bitch can't breathe anymore
nice


They been downtalkin' your ass, you weak and bound to get bent
So take a break from the league...i'll even provide you the splint
Nice concept

Dont act all hard, we know you been pussy since u was born
Man if your tough...it's cause i accidentaly cooked you too long
good concept

SO THIS LINES FILLER YOU CANT PERFORM BITCH NIGGA WHAT??!
If we see you in square garden...because its where we throw our butts
WAK CLOSER


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can tell ya faith is last... i'll take he's face and blast
with the AK that'll leave holes in hes grill like the Jason mask...
ehh, decent at best

i'll Break'em fast.... hes verse aint recylable.. so what he makeing trash
then im skate'in fast... after the info spot'em.. it'll be hard to find'em like a jamican rash...
WAK

insted of spitting you should swallow like ya moms... she calls me the trout clogger
now she helps you wit ya history, got you rememberin 4 fathers....
WAK

i didnt want to do this now R.V gonna call me a noob basher
but i want you to realise!!... you cant see me like a-cup nude-flasher...
WAK

for christ shake i know its wrong... didnt need punchline he'll get done of a few riddles
cuz at the end of the day.... this fag'll just get's Berried like the new skittle's....
Descent Closer


^^^^^


Vote - Ancel, better & crisper wordplay led to better punchlines

Dickard. 06-13-07 08:41 PM

hey, Ransum...if your verse was better i would have voted for you. Don't complain. It just makes you look like a bitch.

Ransum 06-13-07 10:56 PM

^^^ STFU I DONT NEED ADVICE FROM YOU.....

and everyone from RB automatic voted for him hands down even if my verse was better so it make no sense....

so fuck it...............

he got this one.....

it'll just make me wanna win more now...

Crazy Hades 06-14-07 03:50 AM

Shut the fuck up, Ransum. You should be disqualified from the league just because you're a cry baby.

Titan 06-15-07 04:18 PM

he beat u ransom, easily.


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