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Feedback yo..

umm.. vocals are to low. lyrics seem coo. i necesarrily dont like your style. and it sounds like your voicing the voice change. use your natural voice to rap.. keep practicing.

thanks for the feedback..

uppin..

[its only my third audio] :rolleyes:

the beginnin intro sounds nice...ya vocals DEFINETLY way to low...put emotion into ur shit...and it seems ur readin off shit...and try some adlibs as welll...just some pointers...try and feel the music....overall u need work but its ok..we all do...peep back thanx...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=83455

i agree with my5t3ry man , GIVE THIS MUFUCKIN TRACK SOME HEART.. LLOOOOKKK MAN I SEE U GOT A ACCENT BUT U NEED TO LET THAT SHIT FLOW JUS SAY FUCK IT AND N GO ALL OUT, it could work for you........ya levels was low but not much a prob for me.......i got headphones so i can still hear......

ummmm.....the beat, it was cooo i would rock that shit, a lot diff but u doin you and i cant hate that u know..


not too bad...so are u french????lol
jus curious


REM what i said n KEEP ELEVATING

Wow, This Was Wack . .

Why Did You Add All That >>>><<<< ~ * - Shit In The Thread
It Makes It Look Stupid . .

I Turned The Track Off After 20 Seconds .