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DaTrusHurtz 03-23-07 03:25 PM

1. DaTrusHurtz (6-0) vs. 2. Tony Brown (5-1)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


I'm A Pimp Battles

Are you a Pimp? The object of this battle is to write a verse which self-hypes your game and shows us how much of a pimp you really are. Good Luck.

Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links - WILL BE ENFORCED
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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TonyTone 03-23-07 04:33 PM

you fucking lose =P

24-30. agree lol

Edit: i just saw the topic. im goin atleast 30 if i post first lol

DaTrusHurtz 03-23-07 04:42 PM

lol mayne i ain't got time to write a verse that long, but if u drop 30 first i guess i'll match it

TonyTone 03-26-07 11:20 PM

Real talk, Im......

The best alive, i'ma mac, i keep my money in a vault
When i arrive, yal niggas runninback like Marshall Faulk
Ima rida, all yal hatas STOP COMIN WIT THAT PLAYED SHIT!
It's basic, YES i do have TB, shit i KNOW i'm sick
Never runnin outta gas, tied up in makin cash
N got Knots in my pocket, the size of Trina's ass
Ain't eva seen a nigga realla, a fuckin sick killa
Wit Stonecold uppercuts so they call me a Chinchilla
Im on a whole 'nother level, leave ya jaw dropped n dangling
My last scene on the net
....i was ^^ atop the fuckin rankings
Real talk, anyone who told u somethin else is a damn lier
N I suggest u don't match this, that'd be TOO much fiya
Goin so much higher, elevatin, bitch i'm so viscious
Voters wanted 2 dope verses
...........guess i'll post another when i'm done wit this
I'll have a nigga missin, i'm so fly, ya better see
Shit this mismatch, is somethin that my clothes'll NEVER be
Tony B, yessss, comin out fresh wit the fitteds n pennys
I'm gettin dimes while this nigga gettin nickels n pennies
In this game i'm so heavy, ima show u what a G does
See i married Yvonne n fucked willa, while i'm goin wit Alicia
That's my real girl in case u ain't know, plus i'm rich
Yea i'ma pimp, wit so much cane u can't tell i got a limp
Watch who u messin wit, chea the shorty love suckin dick
Even if i half-ass this, my girl will more than make up for it
Call me lazy, whatever, why walk or sprint wit my rides
Got so many whips, shit i don't even run for my life
You fakas is weak, yea mayne i make a mil in a week
So many niggas jackin my steez, i sued em all for a G
But fuck it yo, i dont even fuck wit these guys
Cuz when it's Crunch time i usually go for the king size
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S' too easy, i can do this for days n days again
Flexin so hard, my muscles might jump outta my skin

DaTrusHurtz 03-27-07 10:23 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Brown
You dumb shit, me n my girl are MARRIED, im never feelin alone
While YOU Solo in life, that now you do EVERYTHING on your own

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237392

Whateva u say geek, on the real thats straight weak
How u gonna say ur a pimp? You got fuckin' married at eighteen
...
...
I'll get to myself, but u gotta know this guy isn't good
The wolf that u married prolly kidnapped lil red riding hood
But u think I ain't a pimp dogg? Bitch, please
I fuck bitches raw n' don't pull out like troops in the middle east
The skanks I fuck would never deny their seduction
Girls ain't just show me love...
...they put on an entire production!
That's my rep, see I've been known to fuck all whores
My dick's been in enough holes to fill a miniature golf course
I'm wit a new bitch every day, I live without a care, bum
I got a lifestyle that works, even tho i tend not to wear one
Now, I know this may be hard to believe cuz
But I've fucked girls who hang wit girls who hang wit the girls u dream of
Ur gullible as fuck man, accept the truth, or it hurts
U always get two-timed...
...like how many times i fucked ur wife when u were at work
Sometimes I make girls think they're the one cuz thats hot
But then they get fucked over... a table, with a camera on in the backdrop
Don't hate me, but i'm the dude every girl is a fan of
I get so much play, boy, my bitches could fill up the mansion
Now, I'm always up wit the newest hip hop songs n' additions
I can even do the shoulder lean...
...when I fuck ur girl missionary position
I'm irresistable, no matter what I do, I get some play
I ain't talkin' porn mags when I say I got Stuff that gets me laid
Ur mom's got some issues... now I'm rude, but it works
I heard about ur mom's breast feeding...
... just about every fuckin' dude on the earth!
I'll fuckin' hurt this bum, we all know girls are dumb
I browse for many bitches... n' the girls i pimp have perfect ones
Checked out ur wheels, they pretty fly, never stuck when they go
Ur known to burn rubber...i'm known to wear one when i fuck ur hoe
I matched ur bitch ass n' I'm robbin' this guy
N' gonna give this battle a close, like what I took off of ur wife

Prycele$$ 03-27-07 10:35 AM

Goin so much higher, elevatin, bitch i'm so viscious
Voters wanted 2 dope verses
...........guess i'll post another when i'm done wit this
S' too easy, i can do this for days n days again
Flexin so hard, my muscles might jump outta my skin

Vs.

Whateva u say geek, on the real thats straight weak
How u gonna say ur a pimp? You got fuckin' married at eighteen
The skanks I fuck would never deny their seduction
Girls ain't just show me love...
...they put on an entire production!

Hmm Tony you came a lil played in some parts.. prolly cause of the 36 lines.. same wit Trus..
from the quoted.. they all pretty nice.. but i gotta give the battle to Trus, more consistent and what not..
Vote- Trus..

good battle.. not a bad read at all

§howcase 03-27-07 07:43 PM

Ain't eva seen a nigga realla, a fuckin sick killa
Wit Stonecold uppercuts so they call me a Chinchilla
Goin so much higher, elevatin, bitch i'm so viscious
Voters wanted 2 dope verses
...........guess i'll post another when i'm done wit this
Watch who u messin wit, chea the shorty love suckin dick
Even if i half-ass this, my girl will more than make up for it


vs.

Whateva u say geek, on the real thats straight weak
How u gonna say ur a pimp? You got fuckin' married at eighteen
But u think I ain't a pimp dogg? Bitch, please
I fuck bitches raw n' don't pull out like troops in the middle east
The skanks I fuck would never deny their seduction
Girls ain't just show me love...
...they put on an entire production!
Ur gullible as fuck man, accept the truth, or it hurts
U always get two-timed...
...like how many times i fucked ur wife when u were at work
Sometimes I make girls think they're the one cuz thats hot
But then they get fucked over... a table, with a camera on in the backdrop



Kind of agree with Pryce when he said some things on both sides were a little played, like rubber lines and shit like that. However there were some good concepts in here. Some well executed and some not. When it came right down to it though, Trus came way fresher with more concepts and creativity than Tony. Some of Tony's lines were just commercial completly and though it's okay in this kind of battle, it still lacks creativity and is too simple to just state. So by a margin with consistancy, concepts, creativity and more quotables I got Trus taking this.

V/ DaTrusHurtz

Ryan Hughes 03-28-07 11:37 PM

Ain't eva seen a nigga realla, a fuckin sick killa
Wit Stonecold uppercuts so they call me a Chinchilla
Goin so much higher, elevatin, bitch i'm so viscious
Voters wanted 2 dope verses
...........guess i'll post another when i'm done wit this
Watch who u messin wit, chea the shorty love suckin dick
Even if i half-ass this, my girl will more than make up for it


vs.

Whateva u say geek, on the real thats straight weak
How u gonna say ur a pimp? You got fuckin' married at eighteen
But u think I ain't a pimp dogg? Bitch, please
I fuck bitches raw n' don't pull out like troops in the middle east
The skanks I fuck would never deny their seduction
Girls ain't just show me love...
...they put on an entire production!
Sometimes I make girls think they're the one cuz thats hot
But then they get fucked over... a table, with a camera on in the backdrop


V/ datrus....but by only a little bit. tony ya verse had some nice shit but it fell off in alot of parts the lines i quoted were the best but you came with less fire than i seen
trus your verse was solid had alot of nice shit you but tony almost edge'd it

Alphabetized 03-29-07 06:43 AM

V/ Datruz


Obviously the battle of the week.
This one was close, but in the end I see datruz with 2 more quotables.
Some witty/humerous shit on both side in this one, but consistancy takes it.

TonyTone 03-29-07 08:06 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Alphabetized
V/ Datruz


Obviously the battle of the week.
This one was close, but in the end I see datruz with 2 more quotables.
Some witty/humerous shit on both side in this one, but consistancy takes it.


i concur :thumbup:

Sonny Dimebags 03-29-07 11:02 AM

DaTrusHurtz-But u think I ain't a pimp dogg? Bitch, please
I fuck bitches raw n' don't pull out like troops in the middle east
That's my rep, see I've been known to fuck all whores
My dick's been in enough holes to fill a miniature golf course
Now, I know this may be hard to believe cuz
But I've fucked girls who hang wit girls who hang wit the girls u dream of.....thats pretty pimp lol
Sometimes I make girls think they're the one cuz thats hot
But then they get fucked over... a table, with a camera on in the backdrop


Tony B.-Never runnin outta gas, tied up in makin cash
N got Knots in my pocket, the size of Trina's ass
I'll have a nigga missin, i'm so fly, ya better see
Shit this mismatch, is somethin that my clothes'll NEVER be

Overall solid battle both cats came out swingin Tony seemed to be rappin a papoose line i heard before but he came good not enuff for datruth tho who dropped madd quotables over my vote

Vote- DaTrutHurtz

DaTrusHurtz 03-29-07 12:05 PM

Thanks for the votes fellas and good battle. And yes, I did vote this week, lol

DaTrusHurtz WINS 7-0
Tony Brown LOSES 5-2


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