Wordman VS Soulless
 

Aight Ill spit soon...

i forgot i accepted this.... .but i will drop soon

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u about to drop......

.. i dont wanna waste ne thing

*Womenliness - women Attributes
To have a Soul is to be a man.. If he is Soul-less then...!!!


This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
Spritual Hand Of God, Ripping In this Rap Game
Causing Dipressing Stumps,
Iam Eating this Kid Up faster then resses Pieces
Making Him Disspear in RB Faster the endangered Spieces
His Name Soulless Speaks, Of NoN-Fellowness
Soul States A Man, So Less Means he a womenliness*
I Flating this Guys Pride, More the Permanent Press
I suggest Taking ya Life write Now and Face-yah-Redress
Cause Like A Aids CAse-life-wont-Progress

Unfortunately….

I throw quick-wit-verbs.. Just to kill-these-herbs,
your not good…..or even close to being sick-wit-words!!! (wordman…lol)
Ya only see verses-in-gospels.. NEWBIE so no personals-are-possible…is it??
So ill give u one tip listen!… battling soulless….equals-a-hospital-visit..
.im just fuckin….ur a kid… so snap~crackle then pop and watch I’l top-this-jock
Ha! The wordman.. couldn’t play my lines.. If my name was HOP-SCOTCH!!!
Just come hard…but..damn… ill still kill ya-words-man..
Cuz-I-can, tell your a fake white punk… covered in wrist-bands!!
you pretend!!! Cuz damn ur even atcha ’wits’-ends…
Dun worry… just create another alias…. And u can try-again…..

..just key’in…again!

Sonned!!!!

Yo just uppin for Votes.. Nedd %0 characters thats Gay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

Uppiinnn ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....

.................................................. .............. i vote.... people vote back!!!

yo voting back
 

%$ WordMan

This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
This Boy Dont Pro-Claim his Wins Cause he a chump
personal 5/10

He got More of a Net-Loss Then Donald Trump
Spritual Hand Of God, Ripping In this Rap Game
Causing Dipressing Stumps,
ok 4/10

Iam Eating this Kid Up faster then resses Pieces
Making Him Disspear in RB Faster the endangered Spieces
use of imagination but aint that good 5/10

His Name Soulless Speaks, Of NoN-Fellowness
Soul States A Man, So Less Means he a womenliness*
I Flating this Guys Pride, More the Permanent Press
personal 5/10

I suggest Taking ya Life write Now and Face-yah-Redress
Cause Like A Aids CAse-life-wont-Progress
best line nice ending 7/10

26/50
5.2/10
nice flow good use of personals punches aint that hard structures is ok need more imagination

Soulless

I throw quick-wit-verbs.. Just to kill-these-herbs,
your not good…..or even close to being sick-wit-words!!! (wordman…lol)
not bad give it 6/10

Ya only see verses-in-gospels.. NEWBIE so no personals-are-possible…is it??
So ill give u one tip listen!… battling soulless….equals-a-hospital-visit..
wack 3/10 didnt feel the flow or the first line at all

.im just fuckin….ur a kid… so snap~crackle then pop and watch I’l top-this-jock
Ha! The wordman.. couldn’t play my lines.. If my name was HOP-SCOTCH!!!
bad flow personal though 5/10

Just come hard…but..damn… ill still kill ya-words-man..
Cuz-I-can, tell your a fake white punk… covered in wrist-bands!!
hate the racism 4/10

you pretend!!! Cuz damn ur even atcha ’wits’-ends…
Dun worry… just create another alias…. And u can try-again…..
best punch liked it 6/10

24/50
4.8/10
the flow fucked you up had as much personals but punches wer weak except for the last one have to give it to wordman for having better flow
vote;wordman

with respect for both of you

hit my battles

peace

thankz for the Vote man... 1-0 me.. yah i hate the Racism too,,, I hit yah back, gonna vote on yah battle

ya word man got this.... good battle though guys return the favor plz:


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136555

hey all. wordman had much better punches and personals. the flow was decent, but rhymin wuz kinda weird. souless u had decent punches and all, but your flow was just out there. so wordman gets my vote.

Wordman you had a good easy flow and a not bad structure for your delivery. Great personals, ok punches.


Souless I had a hard time following your flow due to a different structure, actually don't let this get ya head big but I re read it and it kinda sound a bit like common style, good punches but not personal at all.

this is a splitting hair vote but I'ma go wit WordMan

Vote: Wordman

yo look word man had some tite ass multis in his shit which helped him win this battle
shard2loose had some good shit in his but needed to step his game up a bit wit it
vote:wordman

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