>>My Letters<<
 

something I recorded but needs to be re-done.

I'm at best whenever I'm speakin my letters
I was here before the earth, I been speakin forever//
with these words, I'll give you the secrets of weather
the flow is the unit....the beat is the measure//
mathematical pleasure whenever I piece it together
try to stay strong but u can't keep it together//
come to me whenever you wanna see something better
tha rhyme is timeless, I don't ever let my mind slip//
the wisdom of a prophet - with the divine gifts
the soul of a savior - the mind of a tyrant//
the louder my word - the greater the silence
i'll shatter you herbs - ya conversation is nonsense//
I float on the rhythm, of mysticism
there aint no such thing as contructive criticism//
I suffer from the symptom, of cyicims
the illest thoughts I express through my lyricism//

I envy you Vokes, The first few Open Mics I put on this Site received some HARSH, Critizism. But it looks like your Gonna Start of with Some Positive Feed Back..Good Job, I liked it: It was in-depth.
Once you get 20 post, I want you to vote on my battle with Flip

im gon start wit the pros before the cons on this one

1st: ur flow was DOPE more better than half these textheads on here
i could tell u did this to a beat u didnt just write some random shit down
so major props to that cuz i was feeling that

2nd: ur rhyme scheme was more complex than average
nuthin that really leaves u shocked but it aint kindegardon
so props on that keep elevatin wit that shit man

3rd: now this wasnt anything saying anything really
parts of it really didnt make much sense really
i mean it did but it was real random and shit
it was like u were putting shit together just cuz it rhymed
so work on that a lil more

other than that not bad better than some of these cats
i'd give a 6.5/10 which aint too bad so keep elevating
and RTF on my "hip hops resting place" holla

I liked the flow, multis, and vocab. I couldnt catch the concept though. Good drop though.6/10

thatts some nice vocabb in yourr rhyme...and you made it work too so nice shitt

pretty ghood homeboy....i like ur rhyme scheme and vocab usage....but next time try not to use the some words to end the line on text

like the vocab flow was def on point.....nice nice....i like how everything came together real smooth, nothin forced at all, i can def see this in audio since thats what it was intended for anyway....

good to see u still doin ya thang man

holla