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jaime V.s alias
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i set up you spit first usual rules good luck |
You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2 Low, that funky little brother, yo Comin back with a brand new cut And you can new jack swing on my - Cause I got this here so tight A young playa doin damage to the mic (you sho' right) I'm 13, but I ain't dumb So bring it on if you little bustas want some Cover your dome because it's on once again And I'm a young playa that's known to win |
shit this kid spat in two minutes... i smell wre-write,
either that..... or he searched archives for a pre-bite, like meals on wheels... he comes packaged an served, he the type to go backwards on a learning curve, another newb with wack name, an the skillz are equal, he's like the second film, wacker than the sequal, a quick key desroys the verse, which took him days, let this be a lesson that cheating never pays, this kid ain't ghost wrote, i leave him lookin white, shit... i spit darker than you, when u droppin in the night. |
I can't officially vote, but here's what I thought.
Flow- Alias flowed like a river compared to his opponent. Jaime has some work to do, his shit was hard as hell to read and boring. Punches/Personals- Alias also took it in this category, actually all he had to do was use a punch beacuse jamie didn't have any. Jamie should really try to use punches and actually dissing his opponent. Nice personals by Alias, and again Jaime needs to try and also use personals. Creativity- Alias hands down destroyed Jamie as far as creativity. Jaime is very creative, if you consider that nobody else would ever write something like this. He really really needs to dig deep and try and be more creative Overall- All in all this was a very one sided battle. Alias flat out killed Jamie. He had better flow, stronger punches ( not that jamie had punches), and was more creative. Jaime's shit was terrible, he didn't even diss on Alias. His vocab and creative were also seriously lacking. Thats why I have to give my vote to: Alias |
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What the fuck^? *sighs* Why do wack people keep challenging decent people? Alias takes this for obvious reasons... He had punches... Flow... Vocab... Opener was good... As he obviously pre-wrote that as there were no punches... let alone personals... For fuck sake man elevate... Work on your... Structure... Flow... Vocab... Punches... And general writing skills... Learn how to spell... A decent verse by Alias... Jus out weighed the other dude... v/ Alias http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112267 Pz... |
well first uppin
drop an honest vote an a link, an a proper broke dwon vote will be replyed to your battle |
You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo
I'm 2 Low, that funky little brother, yo damn that was dope! Comin back with a brand new cut And you can new jack swing on my - EVEN BETTER YOUR GONNA MURK HIM! Cause I got this here so tight A young playa doin damage to the mic (you sho' right) uh oh ur killing him! I'm 13, but I ain't dumb So bring it on if you little bustas want some i wish i had that dope line.. Cover your dome because it's on once again And I'm a young playa that's known to win woah!......great closer! alias...im sorr but this kid killed you!...you must suck alias..you had nothing i liked...wack herb!.... v/Jaime ................................YEAH RIGHT! umm no..why did you battle him? damn you alias picking on newbs...J work on everything...and do not battle until you do :nono: ..he murked you..any1 can see that.. |
I Cant Vote Either But Damn Jamie You Answer My Call........you Suck Kid
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hey jaimes verse is bitten alias should automaticly get the win.. ill post the link and song this shit was bit from
link to bitten verse http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/scar...unkynig.scf.txt You can call me T double o to the L-o-double - yo I'm 2Low, that funky little niggaroe Comin back with a brand new cut And you can new jack swing on MY nuts Cause I got the shit so tight A young nigga doin damage to the mic (you sho' right) I'm 13, but I ain't dumb So bring it on if you muthafuckas want some Cover your dome because it's on once again And I'm a young nigga that's known to win |
ite not a very good battle here jamie was up 1st,
your stuff was wak man, you came way to basic and it, sounded like an open mic piece not a diss...you had no hard punches atall, also your flow was non exsistent man soz but you gota elavate alot, 007 not the best of verses but i liked your attemp of wittyness here, punches hit (not to hard) but they did hit here.... also you had a simple but affective structure wich made your verse flow well, you had the newb personals but i wud inc;ude more here man, overall not amazing but did the job man nice ............ plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112131 thx alot.......pz |
i fuckin wondered why his first line, wasn't even spelling out his name!!
ROFLMFAO out of all the people to bite from!! thanks :), erm :) |
lmfa wak newb.i thaugth the 1st line was refering to 007.......lmfa...........remember to hit this man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112131 thx.............pz
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Lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!why Did He Bite?....lmao
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yeah i know and the verse he bit was from a fuckni 13 year old kid that aint even kit puberty yet.. yall should actually listen to the song that he bit from.. its off of scarfaces "the world is yours album" shit is pathetic.. im going to report this dude in ir
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alias was justfar too good. go home jaimie. write some GOOD lyrics.
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