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-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 06:44 PM

Dalyricalvillain vs shamira
 
Its on you shorty...
You know the rules...

No more games...

99.9% of these niggas aint shit
And most of these niggas suck dick

shamira 05-15-04 06:49 PM

u need to explain the rules. Are u spitting first?

shamira 05-15-04 06:52 PM

matter a fact since u don't know how to i will!!!

Rules:
10bars
no crew votes
explain votes
4 votes wins
check in


U spitting first!!!!!



checking in!

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 06:54 PM

how the fuck am i spittin first you called me out plus i laid the rules down in frontlines
my rules were 16 bar max YOU SPIT FIRST

shamira 05-15-04 06:57 PM

yeah u right i did call u out, so i'll spit first, but u didn't tell me 16bars, when i called u out, so its still going to be 10bars. Check in, if u agree!

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 07:08 PM

aight checkin in its on you.... drop it like its hot

?uest Logic 05-15-04 08:07 PM

WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

shamira 05-15-04 08:24 PM

checking in!!!


U fucked with the wrong chick I’m never gonna get dragged, I chop up pussies like u, and leave ya ligaments in my book bag//
Competing against me u might fail, cause this chick is hell, fuck with this chick again I’ll show ya little dick for show and tell//
Messing with u is easy, my life is breezy, while u in the back of my my videos covering ya mouth like selie//(off the color purple…*U show is ugly...lol*)
Don’t u get it I don’t want u, u better off asking Elten john for a butt rub or a nice hair due//
If u hooked up with me I’ll make ya bed rock, putting so much pain on ya body u would think I’m 50 putting ja in a head lock, from 9 shots//
Im the greatest, look at my paper, making niggaz feel my reptile style, I’m high gators//
Im making this bitch into a elevator, I’m his life saver, before this bitch was not in order so I call him my operator//
Making this nigga bleed, makes me want to get a brownie and spark some trees, this bitches flow is ass rough as beyonce’s weave//
I got him looking so crazy right now, my style is so doggy u would think im from the pound, just look at the gangsta style//
He’s a ferry tail which to me is not important me, I take his pain away, so I guess u can call him a morphine//
I have photos of u making love to your spouse, on the couch, the only thing I saw that was wrong with it, was when u were spitting cum out ya mouth//

shamira 05-15-04 08:27 PM

this bitches flow is ass rough as beyonce’s weave//

I meant as***

-bODy CoUnT- 05-15-04 08:38 PM

What the fuck this bitch ass nigga votes for you before you even spit...
Whatever tho...
Bitch you is crazy, "A good hair due"//
My braids cleaner than pussy if you scrubbed and got it sandblasted too//
And how long did it take you to spit//
It didn't take as long as suckin ooh wops dick and have him vote for your shit//
And you'd know all about beyounces weave//
Because i seen you going to the same hair dresser jus to recieve//
THe fucked hairstyle she be sportin, You're prolly snortin crack, i asked yo mom about you and no need for retortin//
And wait you wish you had beyounces curves// Cuz you're the aftermath of babies being born between babs bunny and urv//(urv gottie)
And that porn was like r kelly its not me//
YOur boyfriend ooh wop musta went a paste your mouth on my body//

Diagnose 05-15-04 08:53 PM

aight..shamira...ur wack...I could beat u wit only 4 lines and u using 10..hahaha...u threw very few punches wen he threw everything at u....most of da time u talked about ur self then dissing him...ur aight..but u gotta work on ur structure cuz its hard to read ur spit like that wen it's not set up right...

aight frisco...ur spit was wack also..i wonder how u won that first one...but ur aight...u only won cuz u had more punches then she did dawg...u need ta work on ur vocab..it should be like da one in ur first battle i saw...well

vote: frisco....

Diagnose 05-15-04 08:54 PM

this is to u shamira...don't talk smack about others being weak wen really ur not good aight..

shamira 05-16-04 04:07 AM

i'll do whateva i please, and u not gonna hold me down..lol! Still uppin for votes 1-0!

Mc DiP 05-16-04 04:41 AM

nice battle u guys lol i didnt understand some of it tho but nice :P

Metaskriptz 05-16-04 12:49 PM

very close battle.
I dont know who took this ut I have to go with dark
Dark-Nice stuff was very weak though.....but you took
this becuz of flow and structure.....very nice easy good 10
lines....complexity not that hard

shimira-Nice stuff also but lack on flow.......work
on that a lil but more......for the rest the rest was the same
for both of ya


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