Ride With Me *New PT JAWN*
 

Word. Hot Joint. You better download it

IN case you're wondering this is an album sampler yo!


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5453928

Links
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242853
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241801

dang let's get some more replies!

What's hot:

1 Voice/delivery combo sounds good
2 Flow works
3 Slick soundin hook


What needs work:

1 Common lyrics
2 more complexity in rhyme scheme?



Overall:

Solid sounding track bro



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For real thanks for the feed.

I was trying to keep it really simple for this.

People around my way aren't the brightest!

alright listenin as I type. the beat seems hot, I hope you made it lol. I'm not really feelin how the hook sounds so robotic lol it could sound more gurly you know. Anyway your verse is pretty good. Flow is pretty smooth you ridin the beat good. I'm feelin the adlibs you got. The mixing jea I wish i mixed that well. The lyrics is hot I like some of those lines def quotables lol. Anyway pretty hot track.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242923

Beat is so fucking chill..Your voice sounds all smooth and shit, its pretty much turning me on. But anyways, Lyrics are pretty simple, but still dope. You don't need to be all complex on some shit like this anyway so who gives a bibble? Not me, that's for damn sure. I like the hook, even though youre not the one singing it :(

Overall, I like this shit.

Hit up my new song "Blessed To Have You"

the first thing i noticed is your highs are too high......the beat is tight and i like your delivery....i like the echos in your adlibs.......

hook is ight but those vocoder voices is played .....but its still nice.....


over all this was coo i like it.....good job:thumbup: