286 - On My Own
 

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58619922cd7f2c22/


leave feed this is only my first mix of it, im looking to improve

okay..first off the beat.. is pretty ill.
vocals are pretty low..on the hook..
first verse comes in pretty goood..i like the content and flow.
needs a little bit of more emotion...just a little more feeling into it.

ahhh. the hook man. its got a good feel to it...but autotune wouldn't fit this beat..
and that last note is killing it...

send me the beat and hook's words..let me see if i can help you a bit..me or my bud who can sing..
if you want..

otherwise..just needs a little more time into it and im sure it'll come out pretty sick..
you remind me of jin a little..

pretty dope song.