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OH SHIT!! Triple_N and Ca'lam and SPuL with the fiya!!! "Jump Jump (Clap Ya Hands)
aiight word. Straight banga yo.
Intro: Triple_N Hook: Triple_N First verse: Ca'lam Second verse: Triple_N Third verse: SPuL Outro: Triple_N Beat: "Lean Back Remix" by Fat Joe ft. Eminem, Lil' jon and Ma$e www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218258 |
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hhmmm yo first off if Id deffinately do a collab with the first nigga rippin dat nigga was Ill...and the seconed nigga..compared to the first and seconed the thrid was outta place...but he added a diff flavor like eminem did ahhahahah....no offense...but umm good shit Return the Favor if u want
SPul was good no doubt but u just didnt fit... |
lol first off i think yall had a lil too much fun with the sound effects
but word trip the hooks hot at first i was kinda ehh about it, mainly because im so used to the lean back hook but i got used to it after awhile, so word calam i was def feeling personally i thought you had the best verse on em overall it jus went well, i loved the flow, delivery everything was real good lyrics was fine trip you had a solid verse too but like i said earlier, the sound effects was a lil over-used. delivery was a bit different than i thought you was gon come wit, but nonetheless it was coo lyrics was fine as well spul fit fine on the track i thought. if anything set him aside from the others in a bad way it was his quality calam and trip had crystal clear quality, then spuls was a lil muffled it seemed like still good, but there was a lil difference from this track compared to your other ones, i unno if suttin went wrong wit mixing or w/e.... but word you had good verse i liked your delivery, pretty hyped up and shit lyrics was fine, i really liked flow pretty solid overall pretty nice, yall work together well on tracks just watch them sound effects, lol... oh and i liked how Abdul came back for a visit there at the end, lol yall some lucky dudes gettin free slurpees for a week |
Csizzle.- " Am not a chiropracter but i will crack yo knees back..." ooooooooow..lol nice.. flow wise u did ya thang but also not ya nicest shit..
Tfizzle- "Am the king of souf...like thats wus up....but u aint really sayin much.." lol ayo not bad i heard better shit from you...B Sp-"How u gonna reach my level if yo game been over.." lol aight u changed ya style not bad this fits you..hahaha Outro..lol is that SPULL..lol Overall nice collab.. |
^appreciate feed from all. upppppppppp
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everyones flow was solid.....delivery was solid....lyrics were ok....
i guess im kinda biased against the beat n shit.....its a coo song.... but its just nothing id listen to over or anything...maybe cause ive heard this beat 2394023843533 times... LMAO @ the outro... everything was coo with the song...just nothing id download |
Triple N- that was ill for real ya shit was crack i really liked yo part you had a nice flow and a nice delivery
calam- that knee line was nice ya flow was also good I really liked it Spul- wow you changed ya flow and it was good keep this one lol nice... this was a good song all flowed nicely a good mix too and it was so good I put it in my ipod no lie lol. rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218654 |
apreciate feed from both
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this was an ill lil sumin,could see it on a mixtape...Spul up y amic game tho man...next to kids wid sick quality ur mic's faults show up...downloaded n on my ipod...nice
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calam is illl.... thats all
i hate this beat but Trips hook was a beast, alot better than ur verse LMFAO AT THE INTRO HAHAHAHA spuls verse was good..... he actually fit really well on the track Trip had good presence but u didnt need all those effects, some are aight, but it was soundin alil corny by the end pretty good track, but please use a diff beat next time |
^aiight word to both for feed. appreciate
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Hook: Pretty nice...but what was wit the jeezy ad libs?
First Verse: Ca'lam, I was really feelin' your presence n' flow...good shit, had good lyrics Second Verse: N, same as Ca'lam, was feeling your presence n' flow...You got a real good voice for rappin' Third Verse: I don't know what some of these guys are talkin' about...you fit to me, if anything it was just that your quality wasn't as good as the other guy's. But yea, you had good shit too. Outro: lmao, funny shit. General: Brought out a pretty old, n' played beat n' made it hot...Was a dope track overall. 1 |
^thanks for feed appreciate it son
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Nice mix, 3 dope artists.
Intro was nice. hook was pretty dope and had a decent concept. calam your verse was dope, though you have a light voice you know how to use it. lyrics were dope and it felt you went for a gangsta sound on this one, though you aint sound that gangsta you sound good somehow. triple your verse was pretty dope, gangsta and shit cool, lyrics were decent I've heard you do better but so has everyone lol but you had good flow and shit dope shit. spul your verse was pretty good I most enjoy your flow and delivery you step up nice and sound good. you sounded wierd though the quality someone else musta mixed your verse. but overall this is a dope collab yall, dopeness fa sho! lmfao! at triple on the outro!!!!!! thats dope. |
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