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Denied Truth 08-13-04 08:56 PM

First Shiiit
 
www.soundclick.com/deniedtruth called ATX
orrr... http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/deniedtruthmusic.htm yeah
leave me some feedback...

so far....one cat sed it was hot...soooo....holla

Enygma 08-13-04 09:04 PM

Step back from the mic.....can hardly hear what you're saying. Flow is a little choppy, but goes with the beat. I guess it's alright if you like that down south shit. Maybe you should put a sock over your mic. You weren't really rapping about nothing. Wouldn't really be that bad if you fixed your vocal quality. You need to fade it out at the end too.....no one wants to hear a song just cut off. Wasn't bad for your first audio though. Keep dropping....you'll get better at it :thumbup:




PS......fix your link. This is the one that works...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/deniedtruthmusic.htm

Denied Truth 08-13-04 09:06 PM

yeah das a my bad on da cut off...lol...i didn't realize it wud do that....but yeah yeah..muchos gracias

Denied Truth 08-13-04 10:40 PM

Uppin Muhfuckaz...


lol ya see mr. enyg showed up and left feedback

be a follower lol

Phenom-in-all 08-13-04 10:55 PM

This quality is seriously ass, but you got mad potential girl. Get your quality upped and you gonna shock some cats here real quick. Watch for Me, and Roc's colab fam. Gon be hot ;)

fluidmoon 08-14-04 12:56 PM

ok:ya mic has too much pops and ssss type sounds, seems like ya either too close too it or trying to spit right into it,it wasnt that bad for ya first couple times, but you'll get better,just give it your all, keep doin ya thing gurl, it was decent..........peace

Denied Truth 08-17-04 08:31 PM

^fa sho fa sho..okay to eryone else...sorry bout the production iz seriously sucky..becuz i was too close...
i now have a producer lol..and that will never ever happen again..thank you very much and sorry for any ear drum damage incurred becuz of the lyric volume

Hova-Wayne 08-18-04 11:43 AM

Couldn't get it dawg.

Denied Truth 08-18-04 09:06 PM

Get what...its jus a random freestyle...lol what u mean...lol

Deliquint 08-18-04 09:09 PM

ahahaha phenominon called you a gurl

nice shit by the way good shit man

work on thew quality

SPuLâ„¢ 08-18-04 09:57 PM

^she is a gurl. lol

Phenom-in-all 08-18-04 10:15 PM

BUAWHAHAHAHAHA.... Delinquent - you herb. HAHAHAHAHAHA

John Shafter 08-19-04 05:10 PM

Fix your vocals, and you got somethin.

Denied Truth 08-23-04 09:55 PM

lol thanks fo informing him Reck aka SPuL aka Sebastian da Self Crossin Machine....

lol


yeah word thanks fo all feedback...

Uppin of course


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