[B]JUSTICE[/B] new knowledge...
aight this is about a girl who gets raped and...........WELL GO LISTEN
aight i no it seems as if i have no emotion but my parents was asleep when i made this so i spit it low and just raised my vocals.. :thumbup: plus i dont feel like doing it again... soundclick is in the sig.....it is called justice |
dman can i get some feddback......................
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well i have left feedback on some songs so i should get some feedback for mines...
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yo the bass in this track is mad........
lyrical content was dope.., ur flow was on point..i didnt hear any stretches in structure...i like the story telling approach..the beat is nice-fits the mood of he track well.. overall-8.5/10 (possible sticky 4 this week) |
THANKS MAN.....i cant believe this is gettin slept....i know i could have used more meotion in it but if i need i will do it over...
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wow only one reply................................
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wow this is mad slept but the only person who has feed back ontis said that i got 8.5 out of 10
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Listening:
i have difficulty hearing the begining,you could put a lil bit more energy,the beat is dope,flow is dope,lyrics are cool too,chorus is iight but the lyrics are still dope overall 7/10 |
yeah this was more of a rough draft.............id dint have time to re record anything.........i wanted to know if you liked the stORY I WAS telling.........but i a few days.....when i have tme i am going to re record it over..
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alrite d.j this was pretty nice, story was dope, im a topical writer so appreciate a gud story with meaning, very dope....
couldnt hear ya that great, maybe turn up ya lyrics abit but ya content n flow were gud, like sed above possible abit more energy but i feel the emotion was on point... 7/10 gud track Can Ya Leave Feedback On My Acuity Battle Track, Thread Posted Up, Thx |
thanks bro.....
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listenin...
beat is fuckin nice! flow is pretty solid if you jus had emotion in this, it would sound ALOT better (but i understand you had to be quite) lyrics are nice, rhyme scheme sounds pretty good keep droppin tho! ~1~ |
^^^om gonna rerecord this onc ei get more feedback for it......
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word^ should sound better man...keep at it!
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lol, funny topic. sound pretty good fo u not talkin loud, nice flow, beat, aight lyrics. overall good shit, werd
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