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JaCKoFAlLTRaDeS
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30 min to spit blind spit |
checkin' in this mothafucka holla^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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checkin in yo iiight so 30 min to spit iiight den!!! good luck
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My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades" This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted" My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds) Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore" You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring Ah'ight thats my shit, good luck wit yours |
Im About to get my Crush on..........
Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You My words will Rap around ya neck Region Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin. Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Cramps You will neva eva Sustain I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain IM OUT!!!!!!!!! THIS BOOOCH |
Nica ass spit uppin this shit for some votes iight den
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My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades" nice wordplay on the first line... ok personal but not that original. This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted" i like the rhyme, punch is kinda basic My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds) haha... nice. Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore" meh.. not as good You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring alright... time for a new punch... kinda stretched too Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized nice multi, punch lacking Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness this is not a well developed punch So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You aight, i like the flow on this one a lot My words will Rap around ya neck Region Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin. not a huge fan of 3 line bars.. you kinda messed up your flow Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Crampa ok... not that well developed though You will neva eva Sustain I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame blah on flow... blah on punch Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain ok i guess this was part of the other two lines... the last word there should be "obtain" not "retain." Again... not sure what all the hype is about JoaT... you got a lot of mutlis and talk a big game in your verse, but your punches are just totally lacking. v/ triple N. |
My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades" ^^^ decent attempt...but flow was off due to extra syllables...almost like you forced this punch.. eh My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds) ^^ decent personal...coulda hit harder tho So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You ^^^ dats hot Rhyme jack Flow Jack Punches Jack Vote: Jack...way more refined verse 1 |
Tripple N-ur opener was ur best to me...ur punches was ok tho over all...ur flow and structure i wasnt diggin it...but it was easy 2 read...i just think u need to make ur shit a lil more personal but funny....FUNNY PUNCHES WILL WIN U BATTLES TRUST ME
Jackofalltrades-not bad man...u came hard u took this to him more than i expected...ur punches didnt hit hard cause the wordplay didnt phase me...but ur vocab was good...u just need to learn how 2 make ur punches hit hard and im damn sure u'll be 1 of the best on here vote-TRIPLE N |
says i cant vote on it...thats odd...but oh well...thats wht i just thought anyways....pce
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jack...i think ur verse was a lil basic,...ur IQ line was prolly ur best..but that period line...that was lame....
triple n,no punches really stood out,but i was feelin ur style a lil more than jack's...u win but not by much i've seen u spit better vote=triple n |
333 good vocab personals structure and flow try and throw in some more multis
jack work on ur structure personals and vocab i liked ur flow like lk said u came a lil basic work on comp[lexity vote 33 he hit a lil harder came a lil more complex good verses from both though |
yo, this was a good battle. But I think Triple_N came a little more harder than Jack.
Jack, I liked your punches and your opener and clsoer. They were both pretty good. But I think ur vocab was basic and your flow went off in a few places. Triple_N, damn that was a hot verse.I feel honored to have beaten you lol. Anyways, your punches were really good and your opener and closer was pretty good too. Your vocab was a little better than Jack;s, and I like your flow. vote=Triple |
WOW TRIPLE_N REALLY SHOWED WUT HE HAD HIS PUNCHES HIS FLOW HIS VOCAB HIS MULTIS SHIT HIS WHOLE RAP WAS JUST PLAIN OLD BETTER JUST LOOK
My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades" This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted" My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds) Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore" You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring Ah'ight thats my shit, good luck wit yours MY VOTE GOES TO TRIPLE_N |
I didn't think this was that good of a battle......
Triple N came OK but really didn't impress me here. I liked a couple of his lines like the opener. Nice spades meta......people don't usually get them but you made it pretty easy..... Flow was OK but nothin to write home about.... JoaT was OK too but I just didn't like his punches at all. I thought they were too basic. Flow was alright.....few rough spots. Vote - Triple_N Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig........ |
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