Lets see how this one goes*
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5958855

feed back links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3191443

vocal quality sucks.
flows off in more spots than a cheetah. mic presence isnt nice bro. um.. overall this isnt any good man.

learn to mix and it might sound a bit better. I guess.

Thanks for the feed man, any sound mix programs you'd recommend?

Protools. With a M audio external and the Rode NT1-A mic bro. But to start with Cool edit done me justice for a while, just to learn on.

Get at me if you need anything, or feel free to send me your untouched WAV files and beat and Ill mix your shit.

7thend@gmail.com

i heard 3 of your songs on soundclick. you have good lyrics but the vocals we'ren't loud enuff. go to the mixer and turn the equalizers up on your vocals. esecially the higher pitched ones and it should come out a bit better. if not than you need a new mic. but overall you did good with bad mixing. flow decent for a freestyle. it ws decent. but to ste it u get the sound quality better.

talk a lot of shit for poor quality...i would give u tips..but idk shit myself.

i use garageband for the mac, so the unconverted files are in the 'aiff' format,
And the Rode NT1-A mics are dope, but i want to hone my skills more before i invest in something of that calibre, any mics you recommend that are between $100-200 in canada/u.s?

no doubt, i'll try that too. i appreciate all the critism here, keep em coming and hopefully I'll be a dope mc by 2009.

I only see one link post up another one

What's good SPuL, you actin out of your zone, changing my MAS account to "Poonja".

Your flow wasn't horrible, but like the other heads were saying, your quality isn't very good, so it makes your words harder to hear.