Solitude vs V.i.P
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Solitude has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 12:18 PM.
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yes sir....im ready.................................
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V.i.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 12:20 PM.
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God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch
Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit I'ma smash this Fake before all the rumors get around Liar....when's the last time herbs got in the VIP lounge Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people I woulda dropped better, but it woulda been a waste N giving Grace to God won't help, you'll still b a Dis-Grace |
its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay
or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday its to late, crushing bones and all like a dog with an toothe ache so C safe, cuz the bars'll clean out ya mouth like if it was toothepaste and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10 and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments Kayo is my alias..if anyone needed to know |
This was feedback posted for V.i.P
Uppin fah fam.....good battle.......................
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wow, his bars were stretched like whoa!
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yea...oh well..looked fine on a piece of paper...uppin
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damn...can we get some votes in here
bumpity |
bumpity....chyea..............................
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Voted For: V.i.P
its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday 2..meh..seems more like a threat than a punch its to late, crushing bones and all like a dog with an toothe ache so C safe, cuz the bars'll clean out ya mouth like if it was toothepaste 3...borderline self glorifing and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10 and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend 4...decent enuff... so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments 5....ok...... God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit 1....set-up suked cos gay is played..and u just complimented him. I'ma smash this Fake before all the rumors get around Liar....when's the last time herbs got in the VIP lounge 3....decent concept..worded badly. Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people 5....nice. I woulda dropped better, but it woulda been a waste N giving Grace to God won't help, you'll still b a Dis-Grace 2.....played. Ok..pretty close battle.. VIP... Make ur lines shorter.Ur flow is bad.U started off weak..as ur 1st bar seemed to be a threat and 2nd bar was SH.But you picked shit up near the end. Solitude... Ur 1st bar was horrible.U had a gay line..and then u complimented him.U said that he's the shit...and that is a term people use to say someone's good.I know what ur trying to say and all,that he's shit...but man..you worded it completly wrong. Vote-VIP Drop a vote in the link below....or this vote will be DQ'd. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210224 |
1-0 uppin............................................. .......
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This was feedback posted for Solitude
dammit vote people before i vote for myself
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YOU FUCKIN DUMBASS, how the fuck is my first bar complimenting him??? i said he was SHIT s' called word play learn how to use it |
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