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Valiant 07-21-07 06:27 PM

300 'On Point' Keystyle.
 
(Valentino)

Ladies... how would you like to meet us?
Pop off, its the time for you to meet us.
Relax and Get undressed girl...
...You know its time for you to please us
They wanna yell '300' in the morning?
'Till the rain drops...
...and the clouds are all pouring
Higher than life, I'ma blimp thats Soaring
hmmm?.....what?.....you boys are just boring
I don't like being high and broke, try'n'joke
I ain't broke..Rich on Herb, I'm Fining Blokes
fake boys choke, we hunt them down, we lyin'Hoax
Valentino's gutta, still fuckin them big chicks.
Don't be mad cuz I smoke'n'still gotta big dick
Not a pedophile, But I'm giving u kids Big licks
Not a skater, but I'll get a fucker kick flipped
..Flipped, Clova...Tell em what is going on...
caught'em in lie but they still wanna go along
So we'll buck our cannons, and leave'em hanging
leave 'em strangling, and leave'em dangling
Like a Giant, my ratings will be growing tall
Like a Giant 300 will out-grow all of y'all...chea...

(Clova)

U dont even no, dont fuck wit me yo,
Cuz we all are different, wit different rap flows
Why do u think we tear RV up to shreads?
Me and my nigga Val will leave ur ass in the streetz dead
I'll give u Five bars, and leave u in the streetz depths
This is jus off the top of the dome so hold ur fuckin breath
As u can see i dont alwayz rhyme to the flead,
but my lyrics are so true, my words will fill u wit lead
This is a crest or better yet a dog shed,
like my rhymes cum so quickly they spill out of my head
Flip my dimes.... and stack my paper,
the only reason why i do this is to piss off haters,
Its jus a faker, like a gurl wit an ass shaker,
Its time to get payed lets go rob a fuckin Banker
So thats it im done, go ahead and shout,
P.S. Dont fuck wit 300 J.G. or we'll knock u the fuck out



(K-M)

these slave armies of Persia's empire cant take me down.....
.....cause i got the strength of 100 battle ship fleets
and when i roll '300 deep' against a 'million' men charging......
...... im leaving death in my shadows peak
i load up clips to rattle the weaks fresh flesh....
..... till they melt and settle sinking in blood streams
im pushing for higher lyrical circumstances.....
...... like God pushing ocean waters to flood countries
im not a serpant persuading adam and eve.....
....... but i could influence your brains anatomy
to shift gears and be lifted in fear.....
....... instead of getting yourself in pain for challenging me
i put u in silence with out the duck tape sticking to your face.......
....... as a barriar around your mouth
i can hear your screams for help in the dark tomb....
...... and your hopeless of living its the sounds of doubt


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JWILD 07-22-07 04:50 PM

Valentino...
"Valentino's gutta, still fuckin them big chicks.
Don't be mad cuz I smoke'n'still gotta big dick
Not a pedophile, But I'm giving u kids Big licks
Not a skater, but I'll get a fucker kick flipped"
^ Hot
Clova
"As u can see i dont alwayz rhyme to the flead,
but my lyrics are so true, my words will fill u wit lead"
^ not your best...good metaphor needs punchline...maybe somethin like "my mouth is the barrel the whole gun is my head." but I understand you were just shedding rhymes as quickly as they came out your head, keepin it real and there's always respect for that.
also...
"So thats it im done, go ahead and shout,
P.S. Dont fuck wit 300 J.G. or we'll knock u the fuck out"
^ Hot, especially when I reread and stressed the "fuck"s.

K-M
"im pushing for higher lyrical circumstances.....
...... like God pushing ocean waters to flood countries
im not a serpant persuading adam and eve.....
....... but i could influence your brains anatomy
to shift gears and be lifted in fear.....
....... instead of getting yourself in pain for challenging me"
^ Awesome. Extended meta with a good "anatomy"/"challenging me" multi.
overall this was a hot keystyle!

Lil-E 07-23-07 07:29 PM

Valentino's shit was funny i like the flow on it and evrything!
Clova mane ur shit flowed jus right, that last two lines hit hard!
K-M i like ur style basically it fits u well!

Grimmy 07-24-07 03:28 PM

This shit was tight ya'll all got skills!

B.M. 07-24-07 05:42 PM

Sick as hell u guys need to make a couple more callabo's like this all u are on point all 3 got choppy at times but overall a great keystyle!

MOB 07-24-07 06:33 PM

I thnk this is the best keystyle that i have seen so far on here! All ur verses hooked in well wit each others!

MC Puff 07-24-07 08:42 PM

This was tight as hell it is the best keystyle in here keep it up u 3!

Valiant 07-24-07 11:44 PM

Thanks for the Feed y'all If you think try out for the 300 J.G

MC Spit 07-27-07 02:58 PM

Hey i liked this i like how all ur verses flowednice wit each other make more!

Lil White 07-29-07 02:10 AM

this was fuuny...

Valiant 08-06-07 05:45 PM

Lol, thanks ya'll for the feed....300 JG all day.l


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