KiD IcKriS™ vs Cocaine
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
30 min to check
30 min to drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-28-06 at 05:32 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Cocaine has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-06 05:06 PM.

Dude you suck..
You have no skills, and not chancing of winning you lame..
Cuz you could only capatilize.. when you were typin your name
Punch after punch, i'm connecting with jabs..
That'll leave kid more fucked up.. then child molesting dads..
Your a fucking newb, and you'll easily be whored...
Cuz all of RV is above U..
....................................like 7 and 8 on your keyboard

microphone check

i dono if u ment 6 lines or 6 bars...ima go with 6 lines i guess cuz thats whutcha said....


Tha problem with coke today..is its never pure
sorta liek yah rap verses..i can tell they never were
in other words..yah better werk..harder an trainer faster
befor you dare accept challenges..from great masters
no time fa play basterd..yah moms..ill break backwards
yousa plain rapper..even get murked with a verse more scattered..then brain matter

KiD IcKriS™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-06 05:25 PM.

Voted For: Cocaine

Yea, I've seen Coke do way better than this. Kid had a good intro

"Tha problem with coke today..is its never pure
sorta liek yah rap verses..i can tell they never were"

After that it started to sound like an "Open Mic" Piece...

Coke had more punchlines and better Personals

Voted For: Cocaine

not bad cocaine not abd at all i like the punches killa u got the vote elevate ya rhymes scheme more though man and youll be a powerhouse on the microphone

thx fer tha looks ...im a bit rusty...been a minute since i been battlen in text...



good battle tho holmes...holla wheneva u wanna round b


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Voted For: KiD IcKriS™

Dude you suck..
DONT START BATTLES LIKE THAT
You have no skills, and not chancing of winning you lame..
Cuz you could only capatilize.. when you were typin your name
BAD SET UP LINE COULDA BEEN WORDED BETTER DECENT PUNCH 2ND LINE
Punch after punch, i'm connecting with jabs..
That'll leave kid more fucked up.. then child molesting dads..
1ST LINE PLAYED AS HELL 2ND LINE EH OK I GUESS
Your a fucking newb, and you'll easily be whored...
Cuz all of RV is above U..
....................................like 7 and 8 on your keyboard
1ST LINE WHACK 2ND LINE NO CONNECTION ON THE PUNCH THERE'S SOME PRETTY WHACK FOLKS ON THIS SITE AND WHY IS 7 AND 8 MORE SPECIAL THAN ANY OTHER BUTTON LIKE F1 AND F2


Work on your set up lines and your vocab get some harder punches you'll elevate


Tha problem with coke today..is its never pure
sorta liek yah rap verses..i can tell they never were
OK OPENER GETTIN SOME NAME PLAY BUT WHAT YOU MEAN HIS VERSES AREN'T PURE BE MORE SPECIFIC MENTION A GHOSTWRITER OR SAY HE BIT HIS VERSE
in other words..yah better werk..harder an trainer faster
befor you dare accept challenges..from great masters
HYPIN YOURSELF UP ISN'T A PUNCH OR DISS DONT DO THIS IN BATTLES
no time fa play basterd..yah moms..ill break backwards
yousa plain rapper..even get murked with a verse more scattered..then brain matter
MOM JOKES ARE PLAYED SECOND LINE IS STRETCHED BUT YOU HAD MULTIS WHICH HE DIDNT

Don't self glorify yourself in battles it wastes lines that could have been used dissin him also spell things right it looks better like ''yah'' looks better as ''your'' in my opinion.

V/ Kid do to better vocab and multis and tried gettin personal not much to Coke's verse

Return the favor with at least feedback if you dont wana vote the link is in the sigg battle vs. Flip

dude doesnt even get the 7,8 on the keyboard line.... look above the letter U on ur keyboard bro..

good looks tho..im kinda rusty at tha text..been jest werkin on songs since tha summer..an tha site i used ta battle on got fuckin hacked...kinda a shytty i had thousands of battles on there...an countless flows

ask malice dats on here wit production...he partially owned tha site i think..he a good cat

lex..set it up son text

holla

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Voted For: Cocaine

Cocaine actually put something into his punches besides stating obvious facts
KiD you need to elevate past simple just statin facts...

V/ Cocaine..

Voted For: Cocaine

this wasnt a great battle but its obvious that cocaine won, he had better punches ect.

Your a fucking newb, and you'll easily be whored...
Cuz all of RV is above U..
....................................like 7 and 8 on your keyboard

vs.

nothing

v/cocaine

This was feedback posted for Cocaine
 

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