Mc:Xplicit vs RobKilla
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r
no feeding
post due by tommorow
aight

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-04 at 05:10 PM

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RobKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 05:24 PM.

Mc:Xplicit has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 05:40 PM.

supposed to be an MC, dont know why they call you that/
ima show these cats your scene, you dont even battle rap//
I'll drown ya verses cold, dont even think of swimmin back to/
With oceans of lines, MY NAME flows better than your raps do//
what happened wit DustyBlunt, you chickened out, ya bitchin'/
well, if you cant take the smoke, get tha hell outta my kitchen//
you gotta be kiddin, i see ya lines before you even startin'/
you best take your inner child’s raps staight back to kindergarten//
I'm unstoppable, and your dirty laundry has been raided/
i know you didnt bring your "All"... cause on this mic you been faded//
you're overrated, you'll neva see a moderator status/
your lines got more faulty cracks than alligator apparatus//
I'm clearly tha maddest, and your positively sane/
fuck who's tha baddest, between us, I got tha illest game//
I'm totally vain, wanna be bolder than me, no way/
only way this devil's colder, is when hell freezes over...i say//
tha hottest rhymes... that you ever bite in your career/
im endin' it here, tha only MC that writes it from tha rear//
increasin your fear, rappin from tha end to tha beginnin’/
dont believe me, you can chek tha times from when i sent it//
im tha lyrical God, and you definately sinnin'/
after tha audience applauds, to tha death you be repentin'//

you just got lyrically raped/
but no proof, cuz on tha news, your face was covered with tha black tape//
you hittin with rap sickness? but yo Band cannot see me/
you explicit, but my shyt's too hot for t.v.//
watch ya mouth, before i show up at your house/
cover you in Blood, and then Crip-walk on ya couch//
might wanna tone challenges down, fo' yo ass get hawked/
tuff guy talk, have yo ass line in chalk//
so for you to win, i would have to have definately cheated...<for mad nonsense>
i would tell you, but the rest of this was expletive deleted
<for Xplicit Kontent>

"who want what, who pumped up to get rolled up, i spit venom in every direction... soak some up"
-
Xzibit (8 Mile)

And the point of that was........

what was tha point of what, that Xzibit line? dont ask me, you just worry about gettin your verse in on time...
can you see my verse?

no i cant see your verse

did u post it in the right place

xplicit poppin bars like i pop rounds in singles
but "once i pop the fun dont stop" like "pringles"
come hard with straight "punches" cause dawg this a true "duel"
but this cat is a "herb" thats why his chick is a "garden tool"
so let me shut u up like a "bitch" (female dog) tie your mouth down with a "muzzle"
"rip you apart" and let kids put u "together" like a "jig saw puzzle"
aid i got my plan together cause dawg i aint no half minder
in your head like a "nissan" and my lyrical knife is the "pathfinder" (a type of nissan suv)
you cant lower the "crime rate" cause im a "crime dealer"
"took" the battle from this cat which means i "robbed killah"
~one xplicit

nice dawg u kinda hot man
~one xplicit

Voted For: RobKilla

Id have to go with robkilla. Neither had many punches but rob's flowed better then x's. i thought your closing was the best part. Also, x, you shouldnt have to explain all those lines to us. I say if people cant get it by reading it then dont bother using it.

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Voted For: RobKilla

killa got this ,ya came with alot more content dawg,i was'nt feeling your whole verse n saw a couple punches but you need ta get some decent wordplay in your battle.n try ta fix some of your structure a couple lines also dint ryme but overall you had punches n the better verse..
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Voted For: Mc:Xplicit

open..mc
finisher..mc
flow..mc
vocab..mc
creativity..mc
structure..mc
overall...mc

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