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DaTrusHurtz 03-16-07 01:58 PM

13. tiggobitties (1-0) vs. 14. Prycele$$ (1-1)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Prisoner Picture Battles

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tiggobitties

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Civilized Gangsta


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
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tiggobitties 03-16-07 04:23 PM

..........check.............

Prycele$$ 03-16-07 05:43 PM

uhh. im prycele$$ not civilized gangsta. lol

tiggobitties 03-20-07 07:14 AM

shit i got caught up in hw and fell asleep but ne wayz...

yall the people teachers convince their kids not to be
educations a good thing yall aint even gotta G.E.D.
you must not be able to see with them shades up on your face
cuz look down, THERES NO PADLOCK ON THE CAGE
"freeze!" is how it all started in the heat is where it ended
damn where yall relieve yourselves of your business
yall already turning?........well that aint good
how i know? well its just two men witta bench of "wood"
by the contents of that trash, both yall must be starved
so little man i suggest you slide your ass out them bars
cuz after fatty suddenly realizes he dont need ya
he might just decide to one day eat ya
chance of death zero to "nun".....................
...............ya look like a cracked out "preacher"
never mind cuz if you looked at the sky........
......................youd find, theres no roof neither
hat 20,shades 50, but losin is "prycele$$"....aintya
shit even datruth lies bout you bein a "civilized gangsta"*

*datrus posted "civilized gangsta" as his name on the first post

Prycele$$ 03-20-07 12:05 PM

See he ended up like that cause he tried to kill me
look like he just woke up wit a tattoo on his ass sayin 'love billy'
he looks sad and the expression aint fake i know hes a hater
prolly lookin like that cause he aint have no cash
...to buy toilet paper
but hes white and in jail, fuck that
he got shot, hit wit the hammer and the judge was black
looks like they dumped a referee out and said 'we'll be back later'
they got him in detriot for blowin a tech..
..and the cops didnt like the pacers
everythin in his body turn to dust he so old mayne
sneezed in a paper toilet, they got him cause it looked like cocaine
old ass man wearin sunglass like 'u cant see me when its rainin'
80 years ago when he was 20...
..they wouldve sentenced him to death by hanging
he got in for online sexual predator but he failed
now everyone in his cell block sayin he got nice DSLs*
off topic now.. he'd say its noneya business
but his ass played, like you can put quarters in it..


*DSLs = Dick suckin lips..

tiggobitties 03-20-07 04:26 PM

links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151368
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151372
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151374
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3151536

§howcase 03-21-07 10:29 PM

he looks sad and the expression aint fake i know hes a hater
prolly lookin like that cause he aint have no cash
...to buy toilet paper

^^ Only thing I was even slightly feeling in this battle. That's all I really have to say, that took it for Prycele$$ basically.

V/ Prycele$$

bobericc_lyrics 03-22-07 01:54 PM

he looks sad and the expression aint fake i know hes a hater
prolly lookin like that cause he aint have no cash
iight

i agree with showcase, there wasnt much material that caught my attention here, it was either worded awkward or it didnt hit harsh, this line was ok tho. i expect to see more improvement.. but i got to go with Prycele$$ here, he just held a better consistency with all of his material.

DaTrusHurtz 03-22-07 04:51 PM

See he ended up like that cause he tried to kill me
look like he just woke up wit a tattoo on his ass sayin 'love billy'
looks like they dumped a referee out and said 'we'll be back later'
they got him in detriot for blowin a tech..
..and the cops didnt like the pacers

vs.

Nothing

tiggo, u gotta work on gettin' more creative. Even datruth line, tho a personal, was really played cuz i've seen like a 100 lines that look like that. Sayin' he ain't got a GED, wood... that's all basic shit, u gotta be more witty and make crazy comparisons that make the reader laugh. Pryce, u were really inconsistent.. which is yea, i guess what happens when ya don't spend much time on the verse. A few lines weren't bad tho n' u were much more consistent so u got this.

Vote - Prycele$$

Alphabetized 03-22-07 05:44 PM

Pretty elementary battle here.
Nothing flashy on either sides... best attempt WAS really

he looks sad and the expression aint fake i know hes a hater
prolly lookin like that cause he aint have no cash
...to buy toilet paper

So, that said... thats the only bar i liked, and therfore the winner.
Pry

DaTrusHurtz 03-23-07 11:17 AM

Prycele$$ wins 4-0

Prycele$$ WINS 2-1
tiggobitties LOSES 1-1


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