ILLunatic v.s FormulaMC
 

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Formula dissed CredZ & CV CV & CREDZ DISS

-Technician- dissed Formula Formula diss part 1

ILLunatic diss forumula
Formula diss part 2

Checkin In..........
I'll drop tomorrow afternoon

Check. . Verse Up When I Get Home From School. Pz.

Aiight. . .

Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .

I will be droppin soon...
I gotta do some work for the 1-2 tourney

::...........:: I AM
..::Yawn::.. GOING EASY ON HIM
::...........:: Kilt him bad enough in open mic


Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack

Punches....ILL (more complex hit harder)
flow....ILL (some of form shit didnt rhyme just hard 2 follow)
multies...agh? tie
wordplay...ILL
structure...Tie
vocab..neither was way out there TIE

overal..ILL took this wit an OVERALL better spit..

good spit from both..just ILL came harder

good luck in the future..

peace

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Hmmmmm.......
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hmm..
formula's verse had alot of punches..but..some of them got gay..like Illunatic holdin some guy's nuts..he said it like 3 times and it's lost it effect..but those were the highlights of his verse..all solid lines..not much filler at all..but..all of his wasnt great punches..like the venom line..that was "ewww"..and numerous other lines..so..I'll just say..Formula wasnt consistent..thats the word..I will give it a 7/10

Illunatic's verse was okay also..he had alot of personals ..and that what was killin him..but..he also had some weak ass lines..like the second one..it was wack..but..over..this was a well rounded verse..I will give it A..UMMM...ERRRR...let me see..let me re-read..*reads*..okay..I will also give him a 7/10..

and since I cvant vote for both in an event of a tie..Im goin' with..err..Illunatic..yeah..Ima go with him..
v/Ill

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ht=dirtyendzone
hit that up^^

^ ^ Gay Lines ? They Were Personals. . 2-0 Ill, Uppin'

Hmm....
Maybe i shoulda actually tried
Lol......i was to tired to actually go hard
But yea... i guess i didn't need too

Damn.... Battle dead

....UPPIN THIS Shit....
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aight this was a good battle

punches-ill
closure-ill
personals-ill
flow-both
metaphors-ill
multies-both

vote- ill

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