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..Exponent.. vs ache
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10-15 Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-18-04 at 08:32 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
ache has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 08:37 PM.
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..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 08:39 PM.
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Exponent:
Ex. better exit this crisis, like impaired veiws of elephantytis. people still wouldn't stare at you, if ya walked with helmit devices. done from the get go. duke's better off pink slipping his leave. like ejaculation face making, youll only cum decent by biting ya sleave. i'll dish & cream you like jack buer with clam chowder. even if ya super sized ya feeding rate ya couldnt be a second power. your in over ya head, like freshmen in pre cal classes. kid things his rhymes are written hard, cause he keys in glasses. its ironic ya hide ya records and ya think im perishing. kid, stare at me. my words get responses that aren't embarassing. like matthew perry, ya friends call you a finished starter. cause ya words have less indepth than timid water. ya haven't handled anything worth credit, ya half a mason. kids erasing in fear his writtnes didnt solve a math equation. |
Exponent Hea Ta Break Ya Down Like A Parylzed Victim...
Onli Chances Of Winnin Against Me Is If U Hacked Tha System.. If I Handed Ova This Loss Tha Win Ustill Couldn't Take.. I Guess 4rm Ridin A Lot Of Dicks Left Ya Bodi With A "Ache" Watch Me Leave His Rappin Career With Out A Trace.. Winnin This Is Easy Seems Like lil C.A.L.I Took His Place.. I Rip This Herb Up Like A Vanilla Dutch.. This Pussi Is A Newbie Where Does He Get Off Thinkin He's Tough.. I'll Break U Down Like A Mathematical Equation.. Or Leave U Dead With Some Recognition Like Tha Japanese Invasion.. Trying To Beat On Freshmen? Fucking Grumpy Old Man.. With Tha Votes I'll Get 5 U 0 Like Ya Money On Hand... His Onli Win Came 4rm A Prick Who's A Jerk.. Sufferage 4rm This Loss,Hommie U Shoulda Went Ta Work.. Leave U All Fucked Up Like 1 Of 1mics Verse.. ~1~ |
Iight Uppin Fa This Battle No Haters In This Thread Please.....................~1~
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word. dont sleep. hit this up.
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Voted For: ..Exponent..
damn ex y everbattle you in they always close: flow: both style both vocab ache opener niether closer ex punches ok this was the hardest to judge cause ex had some i didn't get (Leave U All Fucked Up Like 1 Of 1mics Verse..) and ache didn't have any real hard ones. but if i had to i would go with ex cause he had more punches personals real close ya'll both had hard ones, but ex's were more directed to his opponent. rhyme sceme i wouldn't usually include this caturgory but ex you scheme was off son so this goes to ache both need to elevate but i can both of you do good things. ex: 7.5 ache: 6.5 over all this goes to ex |
Voted For: ..Exponent..
gotta go wit exponent....his punches were harder then aches...the bar that cought my attention was the lil cali personal....pretty good....structure was there...ache need ta work on dem punches...i think thats what really wins battles return tha HONEST favor....i hate gettin slept on....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164636 |
Uppin This Fa Votes 3 More Votes Ta Go Come On Vote And Don't Sleep On This Battle
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Voted For: ache
i think u got my vote..because..u came wit harder punches..da first bar..was nice..to me...decent..weak battle.. punches,meta,no multis..need to learn to add...Personals..cuz u might be a Prewriter.. just being..honest....Exponent..u had some decent punches..wont hitting hard enoguth now.. |
Voted For: ache
You both nice verses... both structures were good and in place flow was good..hard hittin punches landed and nice vocab too...but overall ache came harder in this one by a hair...tha punches were just a little harder tho... |
Voted For: ache
This was a pretty good battle...However, Ache in my opinion had way better punches and he hit harder than exponent...BOth verses flowed good, but Ache gets this for the punches and wordplay...1 |
Voted For: ..Exponent..
Ex Aiight This Verse Was Good In A Couple Of Ways, First Of You Had Some Good Punchlines, Second Of The Personals Was Good, Your First Line Was Self Glorify, Try Not To Do That In Your Raps, Fix Up Your Structure A Little And You'll Be Good, Your Personals And Punches Is What Won This Battle....9/10 Ache Structure Was Decent, Lined Up The Lines I Admit Your Structure Was More Decent Then Ex's, Vocabulary Was Pretty Good Nice Shit, The Punches Just Wasnt All The Way There This Battle Was Close, Personals Math Oh Shit That Was Tight Hommie, Nice....Over All...8.8/10 Vote=Exponent |
Voted For: ..Exponent..
Exponent won because he had better punches and personals...ache did not have heavy punches..vocab whas better used by exponent...ache u jus sed shit for the hell of it... 7/10-exponent 5/10-ache |
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