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Lay. 06-06-07 10:25 PM

Lay Fear vs Mav.
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
You Lose

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-09-07 at 10:25 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

System 06-06-07 10:39 PM

Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-07 10:39 PM.

Lay. 06-06-07 11:00 PM

eyy..listen
see my punches come hard dude, they'll render you hurtin, see
cuz the first two letters of ya name describe ya gender PERFECTLY!
your fat for sure, when he says he'll eat Lay's fists, but his head flips
ya provin my point..........cuz thats jus how this ^ foreigner says chips
around here Noobs get banned, this is a rap site, but ur whack soundin
n when I say I need to get abandon,..<I'm callin you out for lack of talent
this dude's a bitch, so it so easy to see thats this bitch's lame
cuz you so whack, he couldn't b top gun...even by stealin his nick name!
battle wit Ransum "2-2", but my punches will surely blow ya voice
no loss? this will be a first tho..
cuz ya the first battler I had to turn his votes into a clothing choice!


Closer,....Too Too is a dress ballerina's wear,
and VA..stands for Vaginayou should get the rest
if not don't vote

Lay. 06-06-07 11:02 PM

n when I say I need to get abandon..< Im callin you out for lack of talent
^ this line accidentally got backspaced onto..so when you read it, this is what it should be. The line below it got moved up over the punchline part of it, my bad. jus clearin things up

System 06-07-07 03:12 PM

Mav. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-07-07 03:12 PM.

Mav. 06-07-07 03:27 PM

This kid aint "hard",and you got no crew,no "protection"...
So it will be easy to "Lay Fear" without a fucking "erection"...
Your foggy dude,clear up,your as gray as "clouds"...
Kinda like your feelings,the way your stuck in "Lay's Doubts"...
Your shit dude,and no self glory but really I am a vet...
People saying that Lays crazy,
............so I guess I gotta take better care of my pets...
"Frat boy",never was accepted,no bed,got no heart...
No house,so along with that he sleeps in "College Parks"...
horny little bastard,and on account you like men
So i guess Ill show you "hard"
...................................if you alredy arent yet

lol g/l

Dickard. 06-09-07 12:44 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

This kid aint "hard",and you got no crew,no "protection"...
So it will be easy to "Lay Fear" without a fucking "erection"...

vs.

battle wit Ransum "2-2", but my punches will surely blow ya voice
no loss? this will be a first tho..
cuz ya the first battler I had to turn his votes into a clothing choice!


v/lay fear

reason: MAV. this was a winnable battle for you, if you stayed consistant with your punches you could have taken it. But you fell off the radar after your first bar. Dissapointing,...but you still hung in there a bit.. ok verse.

Lay Fear, your verse was the weakest i've seen of yours so far. But your 1 bar that i saw was a quotable was funny and creative, u fell off the consistant route.. But still managed to come up with the W in the end...ok verse.

v/ Lay Fear

Mav. 06-09-07 04:20 PM

Thanks for the vote Ill hit you up.....bump1...................................... ....................

Lay. 06-11-07 06:20 PM

haha..Yea i did it real fast I didn't really care, thanks for votes.

top C krit. 06-16-07 12:10 AM

Voted For: Lay Fear

wow...I wish someone would drop like a close battle so I can vote against you Lay, yea your gay,..but mav you dropped nothing at all brooo...what were you doin?..^ n lay what the hell happened to your structure?...u like started another line like halfway into another?..wwere u tired or seomthing...

well lay took this pretty ez i'd say...
v/ lay

Lay. 06-24-07 03:37 PM

^homo?

votessss upppinnnnnnn..

KM 06-27-07 10:19 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

feedback on mav....
punches just didn't hit hard enough.....and u had some lines that just didn't sound right like when u said "So it will be easy to "Lay Fear" without a fucking "erection"....and....."horny little bastard,and on account you like men
So i guess Ill show you "hard"
...................................if you alredy arent yet"....

^^^^^^^ those lines are like if your dissin yourself in a way as if your sayin u could fuck lay harder than other men or whatever lmao!....just the way it sounded when i read it.....~1~

feedback on layfear.....
ive seen some of your rhymes before and this isn't your best....but your punches were stronger than mavs....so i give u my vote....~1~

Lay. 06-27-07 10:26 PM

lol..votes uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........................ ..........................

Kirk 03-18-08 12:02 AM

Voted For: Lay Fear

Wow. that was pretty bad but you sucked less than him.

Da Problem Child 03-19-08 08:55 PM

Voted For: Lay Fear

u both atr aight but u were a little but wit ya punches


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