50HATERKILLER vs D-CEPT!ON
 

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TOPIC: Hidden Identity

iight cali whats up homes checkedy check check so did that bitch marvy accept ur bat? check

Czeck out ma melodie

A shroud of mystery is my cloak of identity.
Two faced, epitome of insanity laced with humanity.
As I exploit the many facets of my core,
Many characters dwindle in my mind unexplored.
I look in the mirror and in the reflection I see lies.
In time they cycle and enventually cringe and die.
Yet all of them have lived a life, cried for a time, and lost,
Loved in the moonlight of my lies, in the cloud of my thoughts.
Eventually blurring the line of identity of all its traces,
To a point where my own personality is lost in their faces.

My life felt with pain in this mind,
with me askin myself how can I be so blind,
for I let you go not only for a while,
but letting you fade from me like a dial,
I stare into a face that has no meaning,
for when i TRY TO figure out who iam it keeps on bending,
for the voices scream in my mind and the world mocks me,
I see that my face are like a new pair of socks,
witch I have not known for years to come,
for it dates back in china with a man name sung,
for I faught for my country and nothing less or nothing more,
for when I look into this reflection I feel nothin in my face but sore.
While I stare into a clueless face I can;t stand,
but to just walk away.

vote for decption on here, his verse was real nice, 50 you had some dope shit but what didnt get it for me was how half rhymed and half didnt, i know peotry aint gotta rhyme but that aint cut it this was you only flaw man

would have liked to have seen longer peices from both... good from both but deception had a better peice, no hate... vote deception

iight no hate and here is my first link.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908491

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908493

and my last one some of them did not show up!

Ok Deception Got This Hands Down He Gets My Vote 50 You Had A Decent Poem But You Need To Up Your Vocab Thats What Made Your Poem Weak The Basicness Of It Also Try To Use Better Imagery With Your Words Just Write It First Take More Time To Write And Then Drop
Vote Deception

AIi This Is what It Is hoe

lOL

I Think That Deception Took This one hands down he came Better with emotion and vocabs and stuff And His really Did Seem Like a POEM remember write A POEM not a TOPICAL Lol so thats My Vot ei Hope I Helped in a Helpful way LOL

RTF in my POERTY BATTLE iF YOU HAVENT ALREADY

Vote deception

hands down took this, i didnt miind the kength cos u covered the theme in what u did and had sum sick lines in their..50..work on more creativity, elavte ur vocab..n0 h8 peace

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5-0 Deception Wins By K.o