CherryBluntZ vs phillyhaze69
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-28-05 at 04:48 AM

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CherryBluntZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 09:38 PM.

Phillyhaze69 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 09:46 PM.

this niggas frontin, step up to me, he's not ever half/
someone get him a wipe, he's hyped up due to tha diaper rash/
with all that shit out ya mouth need ta visit a dentist/
look nigga u like a bank with no money, we have no INTEREST/
yes the best against a pure juvenile, this battle u won't rob/
he has guns? shit he probably already commited a "Cheddar BoB"/
forget homey i didn't wanna battle an embryo, that's already a ho/
and instead of a pacifier he uses a male sex organ so/
maybe i should just fetch him some energizers so he can leave me alone and get his "light saber"/
plz homey, u nuthin like ya rhymes, i use them for toilet paper/

HOLLA BACK

cherrybluntz son suc/philly haze bringin philly blaze/i attack u with this battle cuase i rap stiry my ryhmes are wordy/ to wordy for u cause u so new u can't even hang wit me and my crew /fuck u u done son/cherrybluntz sux cherry cunts fuck cherrybluntz / philly haze bring philly bac to tha top philly bluntz try it son!/

uppin for sum votes, yall already kno im tha champ so letz end this quick wit a KO...

Voted For: Phillyhaze69

Intro :CherryBluntz
Outro :Cherry
Punches :None
Personals :Philly
Multies :None
Metas :None
Similies :None
Structure :Tie
Originality :Philly
Complexity :None
Wordplay :None
Combos :None

no i wanted to vote for cherry....im new to this site so im jus gettin used to it so i wanted to vote for CherryBluntZ

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

honestly no explanation needed....punches connected well here not to many forced lines pretty nice best i seen from cherrybluntz

iight so its 2-0, uppin for sum more votez......................

Voted For: CherryBluntZ


cherrybluntz son suc/
philly haze bringin philly blaze/
^^self glorified
i attack u with this battle cuase i rap stiry my ryhmes are wordy/
to wordy for u cause u so new u can't even hang wit me and my crew /
^^whack....didn't rhyme
fuck u u done son/
cherrybluntz sux cherry cunts fuck cherrybluntz /
^^stretched out
philly haze bring philly bac to tha top philly bluntz try it son!/
^^U gon finish that bar?

Everything was wrong with ur verse.U had weak vocab.Poor structure.No werdplay,metas,or personals.Stretched lines.Weak flow.Werk on everything

this niggas frontin, step up to me, he's not ever half/
someone get him a wipe, he's hyped up due to tha diaper rash/
^^^whack
with all that shit out ya mouth need ta visit a dentist/
look nigga u like a bank with no money, we have no INTEREST/
^^^OK
yes the best against a pure juvenile, this battle u won't rob/
he has guns? shit he probably already commited a "Cheddar BoB"/
^^^nah...suks...played
forget homey i didn't wanna battle an embryo, that's already a ho/
and instead of a pacifier he uses a male sex organ so/
^^^suked...that last werd put there just to rhyme
maybe i should just fetch him some energizers so he can leave me alone and get his "light saber"/
plz homey, u nuthin like ya rhymes, i use them for toilet paper/
^^played out

U were uncreative in it.U had better structure and better flow than philly.reason U gon win is because you actually had punches unlike the other guy.

Vote-Cherry(vote in link below or this vote being Dq'd)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589

iight so its 3-0 a KO, close this im dun here............

o yea, we need a mod here cuz sumone changed their vote, so on ma record i should have a KO

return da favor son...........vote in link I posted.

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

aggaint like i said philly ya shit look like a first grader wrote that shit a paragraph its said yo elevate alot cherry you had played lines wack ones but betta than philly iight thats y you took my vote

both or you elevate alot cherrry takes this one