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El Taco 11-16-05 06:34 PM

blisss vs Technique
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-16-05 at 08:34 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 11-16-05 06:36 PM

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-05 06:36 PM.

technique 11-16-05 06:52 PM

time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss
because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss
I chop up your flows and I'm gonna murder you
you try to rap but nobody has even heard of you
your to a light weight with no skills and I'ma make u retired
shit i'll even be ur new ghost writer and allow u 2 have me hired
did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume
bitch im'a do what ur dad did to you and thats beat ur head wid a broom
wow look at your score your a rookie and a pussy
you'll probably bite ur lines but my punchlines leave holes in ya tooshie

System 11-16-05 06:53 PM

blisss has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-05 06:53 PM.

El Taco 11-16-05 06:54 PM

you're weak dude, what are you thinking, you must be confused
cause no one wants a technique...of how to fucking lose
frontin like you're hard, but your whackness is the only thing thats scary
you can call yourself sly, but i guess skill is the canary
your rhymes czar whack, you're shit can't compare to mine
you're so quick to fall, and it seems to russia little more everytime
you like southpark, well i can see you as cartman, its true
cause you're probly a fat bitch, but also RV can't fucking stan you
now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think
trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx

eat shit, bitch

El Taco 11-16-05 07:00 PM

you just got owned mutha fuckah! :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

technique 11-16-05 07:06 PM

lol we'll see what everyone else has to say dick head.

noname 11-16-05 07:23 PM

Voted For: blisss

Technique-Ok..your bassically making some dumb ass punches.Your concepts MAY have potential,but your wording was horrible.Look at your first bar..your bassically just saying shit becuz it rhymes.Your focusing on getting those internals in there as opposed to wording your punches to hit harder.And that lady's perfume line...that sounds like something a 2th grader would say in the caferteria while talking shit with his buddies.
WEAK VERSE

Blisss-Way better verse than technique's.As soon as I read your verse bar,I knew the battle was done due to technique dropping garbage,YourWeakest bar was your 2nd one,with the canary one..and that wasn't even that bad.

So..
Vote-Blisss
RTF in my battle with Nick Flethcher

Shade of Eden 11-16-05 07:47 PM

This was feedback posted for Technique
 
checking the polls for some reason................

technique 11-16-05 08:06 PM

wack vote natural but im used to you riding on people's dicks

Shade of Eden 11-17-05 09:31 AM

uppin for blisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Adam 11-17-05 01:06 PM

Voted For: blisss

blisss
you're weak dude, what are you thinking, you must be confused
cause no one wants a technique...of how to fucking lose
Coo...
frontin like you're hard, but your whackness is the only thing thats scary
you can call yourself sly, but i guess skill is the canary
Nice..
your rhymes czar whack, you're shit can't compare to mine
you're so quick to fall, and it seems to russia little more everytime
I like it..
you like southpark, well i can see you as cartman, its true
cause you're probly a fat bitch, but also RV can't fucking stan you
Never seen South Park wordplay before..
now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think
trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx
Nice...most people probs won't get that though..

Technique
time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss
because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss
That was so fuckin' shitty its unbelievable
I chop up your flows and I'm gonna murder you
you try to rap but nobody has even heard of you
So played from 1983
your to a light weight with no skills and I'ma make u retired
shit i'll even be ur new ghost writer and allow u 2 have me hired
don't self glory, + shitty punch
did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume
bitch im'a do what ur dad did to you and thats beat ur head wid a broom
My eyes are starting to bleed from wackness
wow look at your score your a rookie and a pussy
you'll probably bite ur lines but my punchlines leave holes in ya tooshie
dalkcalkdfa soosr...sorry couldn't see the keyboard, too much blood

Vote: blisss

It was one sided, I didn't enjoy Techniques drop at all..

Germ 11-17-05 01:07 PM

Voted For: blisss

polls bitches........................................... ....................

Poetics 11-22-05 08:09 PM

Voted For: Technique

Overall:
Both verses were weak..seems like u 2 didnt take this 2 serious....Tec...u did better against me!! wad upp...."did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume" whats up with that...?
overall Tec....ur opener was better..and flowed better 2...i gotta say..ur punches were stronger as well...
Bliss I liked ur closing 2 lines...stronger then Tec's

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Best Lines

Tec:
time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss
because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss

Bliss:
now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think
trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx

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RTV, Honestly

One.

Critic 11-23-05 07:45 AM

Voted For: blisss

T verse was very basic, didnt have no complexity, flowed
alright at times but did lose it at others. I feel that u need
to work on your punches a lot more and work on personals
look up Bliss check his bio check some of the stuff he has
posted on the site. Try getting in his head and ripping him.

time to kill this wannabe cuz he's on my list and im'a have 2 diss bliss
because your such a fag bitch just give my ass a little kiss
^This isn't a punch **filler**^

I chop up your flows and I'm gonna murder you
you try to rap but nobody has even heard of you
^I liked this bar but again its not a punch^

your to a light weight with no skills and I'ma make u retired
shit i'll even be ur new ghost writer and allow u 2 have me hired
^Kind of got the concept but it didnt come across right
u need to think about what your writing son, it didnt flow
right as well this bar^

did that hurt you this guys a clown who weares ladies perfume
bitch im'a do what ur dad did to you and thats beat ur head wid a broom
^This isn't a punch, try using personals, it will give your
verse a lot more effect.

wow look at your score your a rookie and a pussy
you'll probably bite ur lines but my punchlines leave holes in ya tooshie
^Nice and witty the best bar u droped.. not a bad verse
but I expect alot more from u as u have been on this site
for almost two years now.

Bliss ~ to be fair and no hate on to but I read your first
bar and u won on that alone... the bar flowed well, the
punch hit hard and u used a personal. the basics of text
battling.

you're weak dude, what are you thinking, you must be confused
cause no one wants a technique...of how to fucking lose
^Ha ha nice punch and personal !! ^^ won the battle
already^

frontin like you're hard, but your whackness is the only thing thats scary
you can call yourself sly, but i guess skill is the canary
^^Nice and wity I got the concept but u needed a little
more work on the dilivery^^

your rhymes czar whack, you're shit can't compare to mine
you're so quick to fall, and it seems to russia little more everytime
^^ ha ha this was a nice bar flowed well and witty^^

you like southpark, well i can see you as cartman, its true
cause you're probly a fat bitch, but also RV can't fucking stan you
^^ again flowed well not really a punch in my eyes try workin
on personals as well.

now enough of this bullshit, you're alot worse than you think
trust me, im not lion, this cat couldn't get any dog to chase his lynx
^^ I think I got this haha it's an alright bar nice closed flowed alright but your verse won this battle with ease..

Vote ~ Bliss


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