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Kwell .vs. Kontroverzey
EDIT YOUR CHECK IN WITH FOUR VOTES...
or I will murder you in your sleep... Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Wednesdays By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
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check in.................jea sounds straight.........
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157339 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157348 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1702421 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157350 |
I guess i could defend or attack, but none of it matters
cuz dawg, you outta luck.....right now you under the latter i'll leave u bundled n battered--intestines left split n severed laughin, as i watch you struggle tryna git ya shit together you're just a bitch on her period, as you're makin ya scribbles so as an MC you a 10......widda decimal place in the middle u aint lifted---rap skills? for you, those never existed, son the closest you eva gon git to a crown.....is wit ya tongue look, i dont spit fa' fun...i'm comin at u wit my articles blazin u a zero--looked u up in the dictionary, n u far from amazin i'm a bit twisted...quick witted when my spit hit this man chop his verse up, ...........so he knows what happens when shit hits the fan i'm tired of ya bullshit lines, n i wont hesitate to make u stop i'll leave u wit crutches, .......jus to become the first person that eva gave u props |
Rv reputation Indicates, This Kid's a herb, That's Logical...
Have Kwell's girl wonderin' why His mother waitin outside the hospital... Puttin This Kid To the test, and he doesn't dare to see his final results.... Slice you Twice, Obliviate Your linesPause .....................................Stop, freeze, Put your lines to a hault.. I'm Above average, This Dude stays underground like talib kwelli... When it comes to hot kids, you need help, Or you'll end up done, ....................................Like the future of R.kelly... Writin On writer's block, But dawg Brain cells aint needed to beat you... I can see the bitch right through you, How? your shirt is see-through... Letters both start with a "K" thats about the only comaprison to dope... You couldn't spit sick If you Gave head to your local pope... blah i got writers block....... |
ok
Kwell: ok your verse was just that Ok not good ok not great ok and thats perrty much it OK. ..kontroverzey..: ok you straigh muderded this fool your lines were more complexced then his annd you had some nice personals in there as well as punches. Vote:..kontroverzey.. |
this was a pretty good battle...
kwell urs was good not to complex but nice personals weak closer and opener..but good flow and structure...u kept strong wit ur punches... kontroverzey ur shyt was good to but u didnt hit hard or as often as kwell did... ur opener was hot but u had a weak closer...i think this battle goes to kwell vote: kwell |
Personally I thought Kwell took this with a better verse overall, it had some good punches and a nice flow, a couple of played concepts but a good verse overall...Kon u had the right ideas man but I thought you're lines were a little stretched, it's like too much build up for a mediocore punch....fairly good battle though.
Vote = KweLL |
voted for Kontroverzey
Kon-your verse was more complex and your punches hit harder then his.... your flow was good and your structure was on.... to me this was one sided beacues the kid didnt really have nything good Kwell-your verse was alright but you didnt really have anything that made me say "oh shit" or anything like that and it was just average if that... keep elevating |
lol @ "my rhymes not bein complex"....anyways votes/feedback is much appreciated...
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yo dawg thaz a fuckin cheap you gettni your lil herb friends to vote...LOL....
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wtf r u talkin about...i dont know a single person on this site...
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jea u do those katz alwayz vote on ur battles ive been checkin ur battles....
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wow yo...i really dont know what you're fuckin talkin about...but go 'head n believe what u want to
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no imma get them some links..................
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