~M.Dubb~ <-herb vs Vet-> DiviNitie
 

aight kid this how i merk ya
i gess i will go buy your rules

8 lines max
no d/r
no c/v
No biting

Dummy kids thease days you challenge you drop first check in befo ya spit due tomar i can only use comp at school.....

You want me to spit first o.k. it don't matter either way you would lose.
I'm the new one here so you got something to prove.
It would look bad on you knowin' you lost to a herb.
What the fuck does that mean,fuck what you heard.
You would get murked get with shit you bought to be spittin.
This battle was already over before its beginning.
So you need to come better than whatever you comin' with.
I got this shit don't even bother bitch. :shoot:

Where the hell you at I only got 5 minutes what you doin prewritin or thinkin of somethin to say

By the this dumbass finishes I will have to go to another class. so I will be back later. The bell bout to ring.

your a dummy i told ya i was at school and i couldnt get on till later this is my check in....

aight check it i told this herb how to make a battle and then he challengs me sayin im hella srry or some gay shit like that.....kid get used to bein merked if ya spit like that

Im the Albert Einstein of rap cumin at it clean like a masturbating Genius//
This kids punch lines commin short like a midget wit a lil penis//
I know its hard to lisin closely to the word of god//
But ima bout to tear this kids ass up like a porn star wit the golden rod//
Like all the other kats Jump the Hurst and arrive at ya burial//
Should have warned ya that I could have kilt ya wit my worst material//
Comin at me wit shit like “what you doin prewritin”//
Well repent…only thing left fo you is to rot as I lyrical ripen//

what eva.....lets get some honist votes on this shit

check it
 

divinite took it no contest, punches weren't hot but they was enough, lines were kinda stretched and structure was off so ur flow wasn't too good but again it was enough

dub- yo u should check some of the elevated shit or punchline contests and try to make punchs solid like those

DiviNitie good verse. not the best but you didn't need much to kill this guy. m.dubb you need to step up quick son. it was a good verse for a newbe, but you gotta come harder.DiviNitie nice punches, short verse, but all in all a good verse none the less. keep it up dun.m. dubb you didn't show me anything great, i guess its b/c youe new. step it up. return the fava

vote=DiviNitie

Dubb i guess that was ok for a newbie but work harder on your punches.
I am going to vote for Divinitie.

uppin this

uppin

uppin need votes on this shit

yo yo yo...its like this...

Divi- started nice, nice structure and nice metas, your "Goldenrod line was nice"
its clear who won but here is the other part

M- yours wasnt that bad, your structure was cool, your punches just didnt hit all that hard, you need to incorporate some multi's also...nice drop tho...

Vote = DIV

good battle yall

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aight uppin this

neither spits were that good

punches - div

flow - div

multis - none really


vote div



aight

return the favor on my battles



peace..

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