Check me out! Please!
 

Yo sup? Im new here, looking to get sme feedbak on my tracks. I already introduced my self in dat section, now I did my feedbak, now I want 2 no wat people think of me. I've only been rapping for 8 months let me no wat u think. '1'

http://www.soundclick.com/deejaydanger

p.s. if any is down 4 a collabo get at me.

reply links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223857
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224046

i listened to the soldier track....lyrics are a lil simple.....flow is pretty good....decent track....not really feelin the beat but i like the emotion you showing.....7/10 keep it up

thanks 4 da feedbak!

you diddnt specafy a track...so i'll feed "solders"

beats a bit diff..in a ...ehh idk..to loud IMO..

hoook is iight

1st beat- quality is ok but ur to loud...and the beat dont help....emotion is good...delevery is ehh..flow is nice man...lyrics r basic gangsta shit....voice is nice

1nE

Thanks I'll work on da volumes of stuff 2 make it sound a lil betta. '1'

pretty good keep up the work
i like your mic presence but contue the good work
your flow was nice

thanks feeling everybodys feedbajk, I'll b sure 2 post anthor track soon, when i get a new 1.