New Acapella!! Leave links!!
 

The songs is just an acapella on a verse i wrote here's the link and enjoy :thumbup:

the song: http://www.soundclick.com/fotrill

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631670

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631701

this shit was dope, quite a few quotable lines, and the closin bar was nasty- track is spoken wordish, kinda reminds me of the acca on the bis 2000 b.c album-

"my 5 fingers said to my dick... ima beat that ass"-
"should say peace out, but yall blow like a sneeze, clasp ya dome, squeeze ya teeth out- ya show ya peice out, leave my knees 6 feet in ya feces leak out like a pcp drout"

haha i like the way you write, keep droppin

pretty dope, I like your flow, the only thing thats a downfall on this was that you can't keep your flow going. You always pause then do that blah blah blah and then pause, try and keep a steady flow man. but it's pretty dope, you have a pretty funny style to the way you write lol. the beans line was funny lol.

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why u doin acapella? lol

its pretty good but i cant reall rate ya flow r shit..lyrics r coo, nice emotion n delivery.

nice drop..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103
holla back^^^^^


Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That"

accapellas allways easier to flow, lol.

this is good, a few nice lines that stood out making it more affective.

Feed used 1/25/06 "Poetik Karma"

yoru voice is odd
id liek to hear you rhyme to a ebat
alot of quotables
id like ot hear you on a track with tito
flwo there wasnt a beat to follow so it was prety cool

Pretty nice lines in there...

Can't wait to hear an actual track.

Good shit.

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220491

yeah those r my fav'S to lol

then peep my other tracks on soundclick :laugh:

Here's the story...i got a big ass box in my room full of rhymes and i was goin through it tryin to find some shit to record and i found this verse which i liked but forgot about and i rapped it...so i was like "this would make a tight acapella" got to the studio and tried to put it to a beat but i wasnt feelin it so i told my man to just press record and i spit it.

THANX FOR THE FEED EVERYBODY

listning......................
voice is ight................................
flow is good seems to be anyway..........................
deleivery is good................
lyrics r sikkness.........funny to ....................

yeah i def i wanna hear this track......................

if this was a free your dope.....................if not it was dope anyway

Feed used 1/26/06 "fresh like me"

LOL no it's not but thanx for the feed

return tha fav on my fresh like me track please and thank you

aight thats cool

nice multis broken up through out... lacked emotion in parts... fucked with the vocabulary in this... kept the ass ending a bit too long to have no real multis in that section... Lyrically sound for the most part... would like to hear it behind a beat to see how it really flows...

thanx for the feed


how so?

ok..da lyricz is str8 on hea got sum nice lines but othaz were kinda eh nahmean...flows coo...deliverys aight could've been more consistent thru out da track tho...overall dis was ok nahmean...