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Tim (2-0) vs Malicious (0-1)
Ok people it's week 3 and to be different we're having a write to a picture week. So far there have been too many no shows and if people no show this week I'll hack into their computer and use my magic metal cock to rape their hard drive. Yes I am being serious.
Try and check in by tommorow as it's not hard to come into the thread and say "Check" or something along those lines. Verses are due Sunday and voting will end Tuesday Night. I'd rather it was drop by Friday and voting ends Sunday but somewhere along the last few weeks things got fucked up. I might extend this week so we can get things back into synch and we can get into the drop Friday/New battles up Monday routine. Anyway the pictures you can write to are below. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------      |
Both of these told me to check in for them.
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checkity check ok im not gonna drop if he does not check i aint wastin a nice topic
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Stare so demonic yet fragile with a touch Like a tree to bare fruit at a certain deration of time, she shares her love Corruption is upon her yet she knows not to think Nor to let a simple sintricate thought slip, for death lies in a eye that blinks Her tears shed like rain but crash hard like the ocean Her emotions ripple away in a sudden rush with no sense of devotion caused a cummotion, her eye's wander in curiousity She crumbles like lost gravity, hitting the ground with such velocity . . . she settles in the feeling of a no name like a broken mirrored frame the jagged glass falling is her mirrored pain married to the eye's of tearony, she see's her own crossed paths of a mirrored game, she hides to seek from her own clone chrome, a life of neon and a pint of home Yet the bloodied tears still rapidly descend into a pint of home all alone Shaked, moved as her emotion burn all of her mistakes She leaps and plunges to her death, which is always remembered as the leap of faith |
As i feel my eyes burn on past sights of violence i see I think about riots, gunfights, police brutality, and homicide While soaking myself despite my bathing in revelry I sit and watch T.v and the fragments of lost promises With a president preparing to introduce the new world order With studies of a better word and horrible hypothesis . . . . I lay on a jail bunk and still speculate things being overrun And the way society is gettin terrible through my eyes And burning my eyes despite horrific things i've done As i approach realease dat from this hell cell i await a change Despite the way society views a man coming from jail but i wonder if suck a stereotype will put change out of my range I know most convicts who seen what i saw are muchly hated witnessing and commiting murder, rapes and other crimes despite me beng an accsesory in still hated for being incarcerated Every night my eyes bleed due to past things i've seen despite the fact that i never did anything i still feel the pain seems like im on a fence of good and bad and i cant get from between So for all lost people i hope you take this as positive feed And be sure to cover your eyes unlike myself and remember And I show much sympathy to any other, who's eyes continuesly bleed |
Both the drops were very good.
. T- your drop was good but the vocabulary wasn't at your usual standard and the flow got awkard at a point as well. . M-your verse was good too, the flow was good and the complexity in language was very good. Overall, the imagery got you points. . . \/ Malicious, but both you ma dogs so stay up. |
that sucks Mal saw what i dropped from RB so he knew what to outdo me on?!..WTF at Apo changing opponents and not telling me?!..WOW
fuck it i dont care its fair and koo nice drop mal. |
I aint see what u dropped on rb, wtf? i dont even know who you are
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