Insidious VS MADD HAtter81
 

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30 minutes after check in to post
spits due by the end of today, i'll prolly start mine at night, who knows when, but i gotta go out today and do errands and shit. good luck hatter.

okayy

you claim to be a gangsta so wheres ya gun/
this bitch hails from phoenix imma eclips the "sun"

im the winner..already in the winners circle/
dont hold ya breath for votes cuz you'll just turn purple

bitch you'll suffacate ya brains will explode/
dude you a hoe and right tit is exposed

my finisher will determen ya fate/
all you is a net rapper who gonna sign you bill gates

my punchlines you and make ya eye turn black and blue/
put sticks on ya eardrums and make beats like the neptunes

i'll make you sweat till loose weight like al roaker/
the closest thing to a gun you had was a super soaker

to you imma do the most sinniester sin/
kill you cuz you aint hard bitch stop the shananagins

put you six feet under wit a murderious flow/
make you a lawn ornament like a nome or pink falmingo

thats all

my 30 minutes starts now.
peace

ok, i won't feed, just to be fair to you,
not like there's shit to eat, this fool is dishin shit soup.

ur 13 and running with CS, that's a no no, come get a spanky,
my method of murder's got u cryin for ur blanky.

my murderous-method's get methodically-more-merky,
i must-be messed up in the mind for me to be murdering a 13.

leave the crime scene to the adults kid, we do'nt want u to get hurt,
i follow BIG and PAC, who u follow? ernie and burt?

with a name like madhatter ur just askin to get plastered,
what'd u do to the rhyme? better get mommy to clean up that disaster.

oh, and tell her i said hi!

let's get them votes in ppl, good battle hatter.

uppin for votes, please vote on battles in my sig if got time too!

uppin this shit for votes ppl, leave a link and we'll return the favor!

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! come on, i'll return the favor! remember that!

uppin once again, come on ppl, this battle was pretty hot, let's get some votes, we'll return the favor!

can we get some votes PLEASE! jebus crizzist, we'll return the favor!

upping for votes, come on ppl

let's get some more votes ppl PLEASE, we'll return the favor, i wanna get this shit over with!

uppin for votes yall, come on, i'll vote ifu leave a damn link!

upping, what the fuck ya'll? why can't u take 8 minutes to read and vote, shiiiiiiiiiiit

nice verses from both hatter had a couple good punches and wordplay but didnt come that hard wasnt feelin his verse that much u had a tight closer and opener but u had some filler and lines that werent to creative/original...

overall: 6/10

sid had some killa punches and good opener and closer again not much filler maybe 1 line and i loved this bar...
"leave the crime scene to the adults kid, we do'nt want u to get hurt,
i follow BIG and PAC, who u follow? ernie and burt?"
feeling that shyt type ill...nice wordplay and multies on the last bar good verse could have done better but overall u was nice....

sid: 7.5/10

vote:sid....overall i think he had the better verse and his opener closer and that line ^^there about ernie and bert sealed it nice shyt from both sid takes it

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