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KempoMRK 12-03-06 09:43 AM

9. Comedian (6-1) vs 10. Ace Heratoga (4-2)
 


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Comedian 12-04-06 03:09 PM

12-14? Or I'll just match.

g/l.

Ace Heratoga 12-04-06 03:33 PM

Why yes hello...

14 sounds good to me there bud

Comedian 12-08-06 12:00 AM

i saw your sex mania battle,
& was reminded 'bout your girl & how i was fucking her first kid
Comedian fill'er to the point that she resemble one'a your verses
I'm stopping this coward, and i'm ending this bitch kid
it's said Knowledge is Power... then Ace is energy efficient
your jealousy's seen you whenever I step on the scene
You such a poor fuck, envy is the only thing that's getting you green
you lose, i trash clouts- fuck this dude's gay babble
now you'll brag 'bout second place, too bad it's a two way battle
sorry dog, but you homo dudes ain't hardly hot
the colors inside Ace's closet be looking like a smartie box



it's Friday. thanks for showing. it's been great.

Ace Heratoga 12-08-06 03:09 AM

6-26-06
Quote:
Originally Posted by JTR
Fucka lame gay, jealousy is a bitch, & ya not better then me
Duke even changed his name font to show he's green with envy


12-8-06
Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
your jealousy's seen you whenever I step on the scene
You such a poor fuck, envy is the only thing that's getting you green



Ayo...
This pizza faced geek shook of Glocks ain't no need to drop bombs
These red beams will blend in with his acne... when I dot Com
It's flu time... buried under the shit you hacking up often...
got Trent Rezner stoppin on ya chest I put a nine inch nail in ya coffin
you sleepign on me... knock some sense in em when i rock this bitch
He was dreaming of a win... than he came back into concisniss
So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits
Ya girls spreading rumors... ya sex life continues to plummet
Ain't no one on your dick... even when u sleep on ya stomach

No problem... I know its been great...

BTW if you want a no show win, you shouldn't post 1 minute after the deadline soonnnn

Comedian 12-08-06 09:11 AM

lol, i don't care. i'm just glad you showed.

Luse Cannon 12-08-06 09:58 AM

i saw your sex mania battle,
& was reminded 'bout your girl & how i was fucking her first kid
Comedian fill'er to the point that she resemble one'a your verses
nice opener. witty and a good punch

I'm stopping this coward, and i'm ending this bitch kid
it's said Knowledge is Power... then Ace is energy efficient
LMAO great line almost perfect

your jealousy's seen you whenever I step on the scene
You such a poor fuck, envy is the only thing that's getting you green
I dont know if he was impyin that you bit, but it was still just a mediocre line

you lose, i trash clouts- fuck this dude's gay babble
now you'll brag 'bout second place, too bad it's a two way battle
Good line right here. i like it

sorry dog, but you homo dudes ain't hardly hot
the colors inside Ace's closet be looking like a smartie box
ok line.not really to be used for a closer




Ayo...
This pizza faced geek shook of Glocks ain't no need to drop bombs
These red beams will blend in with his acne... when I dot Com
rofl perfect opener

It's flu time... buried under the shit you hacking up often...
got Trent Rezner stoppin on ya chest I put a nine inch nail in ya coffin
ok line i guess

you sleepign on me... knock some sense in em when i rock this bitch
He was dreaming of a win... than he came back into concisniss
not really what i was lookin for

So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits
Nice line right here.

Ya girls spreading rumors... ya sex life continues to plummet
Ain't no one on your dick... even when u sleep on ya stomach
good solid line right here. wish you wouldve kept em comin though

Best battle i voted on so far
Tough one. almost a toss up. wish i could call it a draw but
v/ace

Ace Heratoga 12-08-06 01:49 PM

*Bump*

uppin for votes

King Solo 12-08-06 04:27 PM

i saw your sex mania battle,
& was reminded 'bout your girl & how i was fucking her first kid
Comedian fill'er to the point that she resemble one'a your verses
I'm stopping this coward, and i'm ending this bitch kid
it's said Knowledge is Power... then Ace is energy efficient
you lose, i trash clouts- fuck this dude's gay babble
now you'll brag 'bout second place, too bad it's a two way battle


VS.

This pizza faced geek shook of Glocks ain't no need to drop bombs
These red beams will blend in with his acne... when I dot Com
So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits
Ya girls spreading rumors... ya sex life continues to plummet
Ain't no one on your dick... even when u sleep on ya stomach


Yeah, I've got this pretty much even on quotables. Both came with solid verses and there were good levels of consistency. Overall, I'm going to have to go with who had the better overall verse and I thought that Comedian did. I thought the envy/green line was pretty cool until I saw it was apparently bitten or whatever. But still, the two bars of Ace's I didn't quote I just wasn't feeling them at all. The smartie box line was aight, poorly worded but still pretty decent.

So, overall... I think that Comedian won.

V/ - Comedian

Stanza. 12-08-06 05:42 PM

Comedian

i saw your sex mania battle,
& was reminded 'bout your girl & how i was fucking her first kid
Comedian fill'er to the point that she resemble one'a your verses
Aii Opener
I'm stopping this coward, and i'm ending this bitch kid
it's said Knowledge is Power... then Ace is energy efficient
.....Too self-centered like...
your jealousy's seen you whenever I step on the scene
You such a poor fuck, envy is the only thing that's getting you green
....Good...
you lose, i trash clouts- fuck this dude's gay babble
now you'll brag 'bout second place, too bad it's a two way battle
.....Kinda played concept but nice wording
sorry dog, but you homo dudes ain't hardly hot
the colors inside Ace's closet be looking like a smartie box
.....Meh...[b/]

Overall I say that This verse was a little selfcentered at a point but then again id say that it had some good pucnhez but played concepts

Vs.

This pizza faced geek shook of Glocks ain't no need to drop bombs
These red beams will blend in with his acne... when I dot Com
[b],,,:shock:...

It's flu time... buried under the shit you hacking up often...
got Trent Rezner stoppin on ya chest I put a nine inch nail in ya coffin
.....Aii....
you sleepign on me... knock some sense in em when i rock this bitch
He was dreaming of a win... than he came back into concisniss
So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits
Ya girls spreading rumors... ya sex life continues to plummet
Ain't no one on your dick... even when u sleep on ya stomach
These liines were nicely worded and hit correctly

Overall id say that this verse came with more direct punchez and it focused more on the opponent and then it was definitely a little more personally token and thats whats takin this battle to where it should be

my v/ Ace

Comedian 12-08-06 08:25 PM

I don't mean to sway, but how were those lines even similar?

Blah.

Up.

Te Ora 12-08-06 08:35 PM

i saw your sex mania battle,
& was reminded 'bout your girl & how i was fucking her first kid
Comedian fill'er to the point that she resemble one'a your verses
I'm stopping this coward, and i'm ending this bitch kid
it's said Knowledge is Power... then Ace is energy efficient

vs.

This pizza faced geek shook of Glocks ain't no need to drop bombs
These red beams will blend in with his acne... when I dot Com
It's flu time... buried under the shit you hacking up often...
got Trent Rezner stoppin on ya chest I put a nine inch nail in ya coffin
So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits


the 'envy / green' thing is really played imo. i doubt you bit it, it's just played. it doesn't really make a difference in the end tho, as i've got ace edging this on quotables.

v/ ace

Ace Heratoga 12-08-06 08:45 PM

Oh I'm not saying you bit... I'm just sick of mother fuckers quoting lines that are played... a la DTH's Hera and toga lines against me last week...

I never bitch or complain about a vote or shit when its happening... I'm just trying to avoid that shit

Roger Glocks 12-09-06 02:48 AM

comedian

your jealousy's seen you whenever I step on the scene
You such a poor fuck, envy is the only thing that's getting you green

vs

ace


It's flu time... buried under the shit you hacking up often...
got Trent Rezner stoppin on ya chest I put a nine inch nail in ya coffin

So Rell Rap Disciple and Luciano no showed so u hardly shit
You can call it luck if you want.. but you'd be better off callin it quits


ace verse was pretty cool...i expected more from comedian he usually comes doper..the sex maniac battle line coulda been better...ace verse was pretty cool...felt alot of lines...

vote-ace

KempoMRK 12-09-06 06:51 AM

Up over no-shows.


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