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-SwizZ- 05-21-04 10:06 PM

Met-A-4 Vs -SwizZ-
 
Aight You Know RuleZ Gon SpiT

Untold 05-21-04 10:23 PM

aiight. hom up. this is my check in. i'll spit in a sec. i need to set another battle. brb. peace!

-SwizZ- 05-21-04 10:24 PM

Aight This My CHeCk In Aight......

CHEckity Check Check

Untold 05-21-04 10:40 PM

aiight. i'm here. this is the new.........

first off, fuck ya crap and the shit you say, you a whack mc and bitch you gay/
you claim you can rap, but we know ya wrong, cause you sit when you piss and wear a thong/
plus swizz is tryin to see me, wit his dick, i'll rip/
lyrically ill, everyone here knows thats some bull shit/
but, i'll keep on goin, while you knowin you be slowin, get in my path, its ya ass i'll be mowin/
swizzy swizz, is a person that nobody will miss, blow ya dumb ass up and all thats left is a puddle of ya piss/(he pissed himself cause he was scared)
and nigga, dont fuck around, cause i'm the real me, quick to merk you in a sec off of one free/(free=freestyle)
i'll this dude, know he sucks alot, but don't catch the clap when you on ya knees or not/
swizz gettin murdered, raped and killed, battle me and get ya ass ripped/
( you know )
so, get on the net when you about met, grab ya tech when you think you see met/
you answered me, now ya ass is gettin raped, you about to feel ya steak hit my plate/
nigga, i hit em up!

R.I.P. 2Pac(This song contains an interploration of "Hit Em Up")

Untold 05-21-04 10:42 PM

aiight bra, u next. hurry and drop ya shit. peace!

Untold 05-21-04 11:12 PM

say, where you at man? i'm waitin dawg! you take bookoo long wit ya shit.

-SwizZ- 05-22-04 12:33 AM

If I had To Judge This Kid's Rhymes...It Would Have Only Met-A-4.|*
He Dissed My name...Now Its waR after ThIs MerKin...He's Not Gonna Wanna Rap Anymore.||
My Flow Like Tornadoes......Cuz It Got EveryBody SpiNNiN.|
Ill Tell You.....From The Beggining Meta Neva Had A Chance Of WinnIN.||

[SwiTCh StylEs)

Y,You Gonna Battle A SiCk iLL Rapper When Ya Verse Cant Even Be Compares To Noobs.|
On RB I Bet If I Asked Him To Battle Again....He'll Come Up WIth A Dumbass Excuse.||
Uunderstand Meta,Ya RHymes And Lines Can Never Be better.|
Really,I'LL Go Easy On His Ass CUz I Bet He Never Had A Love Letter.||
Victim Number 5....He'll Be The One To Get Me InTo The Elevated.|
End His Reign..If He Had One.. This Kid Is Loved By None And Now Is even More Hated.||
Really Everyone Dispises Meta And Hate The Fact That He Had To Be Created.|||
Simply,Ill Take This Battle Cuz This Isnt Shit.|
Ending His Losing Streak No This battle Wasnt Even Worth It.||
So Now What He Wanna Do I make This Dumb Kid Retire.|
Understand,He Couldnt Spit Hot If His Mouth Was FuLL Of Fire.||
C,If He Had A Crew Job...It Would Be Newbs But Still Wouldnt Get Hired.||
Keppin Him From WiNNin Yea EveryTime I Spit Punches This Kid Ducks.|
SO Let Me TeLL You Every Say YOUR VERSE SUCKS

Untold 05-22-04 01:30 AM

yo. lets up this battle and get some votes in. lets get it over with. peace!

-SwizZ- 05-22-04 01:28 PM

This BAttle Uppin Fa VOTES.............

-SwizZ- 05-22-04 10:32 PM

This BAttle UppiN Just Drop Link wiLL return This FAVOR

Sik Wit It 05-22-04 10:37 PM

Flow~ SwizZ
Meta's~ Both
Humor~ SwizZ
Multi's~ Met
Structure~ Both
Vocab~ None
Finisher~ SwizZ

Overall Vote~ -SwizZ

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Untold 05-23-04 12:17 AM

we need votes on this shit. so please lets up this bitch?!

-SwizZ- 05-23-04 11:55 PM

This Battle StiLL Uppinm Will Return Votes.|
Just Drop Da LiNk YO.||

-SwizZ- 05-29-04 12:49 AM

Come On Guyz This Battle Gettin Slept On....Will Return Favor Juss Drop A DamnLink Aight,,,

Publicity 05-29-04 12:59 AM

met had a pretty nice flow and a few decent punches but i didnt like those last few lines at all......plus he explained his punches...thats very newbish....Swizz's punches hit a lot more hard...his structure was more creative....so he wins because his was easier to read and more creative

Vote=SwizZ....i will poll later


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