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My First Audio-"Freestyle"
this is ma first audio peep it and give me some feedback, im 13
"7 Bars-Freestyle" |
aight for ya first one this was decent......quality isnt tha best.....lyrics is pretty good...flow and delivery need to be worked on a little....you need to work on mic presence your too quiet....just ride tha beat more
return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158964 |
but its a pretty to be a good beat........for ya first one
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...son...u got a ways to go...
Quality was bad...flow was aight....u mixxed it hella wrong...cuz u was off beat...but for ya first...its AIGHT...dont go to LL sayin that audio heads aint ready kid.. |
yo, thanx for da feedback yall
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yo return the favor and drop feeback on me and 20 grands collab
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iight, uppin dis fro feedback yall
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yeah it was an alright piece........
........not the best but definitely not too bad for ur first.......... |
yea, thanx uppin dis shit yall
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you need to boost your volume of the vocals, also u seemed wayyyyy off beat...
idk what u were going for. descent drop for a freestyle i guess, keep it real 1 |
yea, uppin dis shit for feedback yall
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up ya own track one more time and ima ban your ass. Read the rules. Track is aight, but hella simple flow. You need to work on emotion. Lol - you kinda sound like you tryin to be Game. Drop something new rather than up ya own tracks. If peeps aint feelin it - theres a reason its falling off the page.
-Phenom |
Yo Desert for first piece this was not bad.....
Nice beat... Your verses were decent but your flow was off!.... Just think you should put more effort or get more into it..... Sounds like you just chillin |
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lol, iight i was jus so excited to have audio, cause i been tryin for so long, ma bad, i wont do it again iight |
not bad for 13...we should battle when i get my audio...be close...lol not i have a good chance but good realy not bad...for freestyle
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