vango vs. shadows edge
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

lol... must you match me up against someone good ;)

checkin in wassup SE

not much man.. g/l.. much respect.

Alright let me kick this and get this over

Love me or hate me you could never berate me/ im runnin this site, your a johhny come lately/

See I have a dream like Martin Luther King/ one day wack mc's wont be let in the ring/

Cuz you wouldnt be dope if i strapped coke on your back/ and then laceD your shoes and your socks with pure smack/

Furious Flow? Are you serious HO!/ this aint a horse race kid, you dont get points for the show/

See a "Shadows" a reflection thats made by the light/ why do you hide in the dark if your lyrics are tight?/

You beatin me ha you must gassed on that "RockY"/ cuz when i was perfectin my skills you were still playing hockey/

Well at least you got "Hope" and your green four leaf clover/ if the rap playoffs started today, your season be over/

Seein your from Canada i suppose you speak French/ How do you say "Fuck you im tighter, HAVE A SEAT ON THE BENCH!!!!!/

Shit didn't realize you had posted... I'll key mine up right now.

Aight.. check it:

At the mic he seem well versed cuz he got his verse rehearsed
But after this, he avoid the mic like that shit was cursed
The way you rap – it’s like you trying to be the worst
They call you sprite the way you obey that thirst…

This cat couldn’t be sick if he had fucking AIDS
Cuz he not, and he does - a lyrics site and 8 MC’s that he paid
But he still come like “I’m gonna shit on you” – rhymes simplistic
Fuck that, I’ll splatter fecal matter on your platter like I’m just plain sadistic

Last MC to test me got 8 to the chest, so this cat stressed
But damn there ain’t no excuse for the way you dressed
Pussy try to hide his breast with a camouflage bra
Shit’s why the only love he get is a “ménage a moi”*

Check the sig, this cat call himself a “freestyle prophet”
His style’s free, explain why his album never profit…
Your rhymes from bad to worse, never sold by the sell-by-date
Destined to end in the hearse, like you fell-by-fate

*for all that don’t know.. it’s like a “ménage a trios” is three people going at it.. “moi” means “me”.. you get the picture..

Oh... and I'm not Canadian.. IL = Illinois.. DirtyBoy is canadian though.. um it was a nice personal. And this is not a free post.

check it that was a sick battle with ruff spits from both of u

Shadow
shadows flow was tight from beginning to end and his structure was on to. his punches were hard and direct and connected well with sum gud personals in there and a good use of multis. ther was also sum originality in there that added to an excellent performance
Overall -9/10
Vango
vango ure flow was on but shadow had slightly better flow nad structure than u. ure punches were not all that but they were gud and connected but i was just feelin shadows spit more. he used multis better threw in more personals and he had better originality in his spit.
Overall - 7/10

Vote - Shadows edge

I always vote on who had the best punches cause that is how I see who the best Battler is. This time Vango came wit the best punches. His horse race line is what sealed it for him.........

Vote - Vango

Uppin this over closed battles...........................

Pussy try to hide his breast with a camouflage bra
Shit’s why the only love he get is a “ménage a moi”*
But he still come like “I’m gonna shit on you” – rhymes simplistic
Fuck that, I’ll splatter fecal matter on your platter like I’m just plain sadistic

these 2 bars were shadows best. i liked the flow and they hit hard too
nice job.

vangos best line

See a "Shadows" a reflection thats made by the light/ why do you hide in the dark if your lyrics are tight?/

nice wordplay

i got to give this to shadow

uppin for votes yalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll............... .....................

breakdown for vango:

flow:alright could of been better a couple of lines seemed not to work too well 6/10

volcab:average alright though 6/10

punches:some nice lines not too many of them but they were good like,"See a "Shadows" a reflection thats made by the light/ why do you hide in the dark if your lyrics are tight?/" good job 7/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for shadows edge:

flow:good job best part of your verse 8/10

volcab:pretty solid better then average 7/10

punches:not much too direct and personal but best line,"This cat couldn’t be sick if he had fucking AIDS" played topic but i don't know i wasn't feeling the rest of the lines too much 5/10

overall:20/30

vote--shadow's edge barley though try harder on your punches next week

soo... looks like 3-1 me...