idle vs Straight Ace
 

Battle
10-12 lines..
No hate,crew,beef & herb votes.
No feeding either.
Go first, since you set the challenge.

checking in, expect me to spit in about five minutes.

structure may be a bit off (it's my first battle)

This guys name is straight ace are you sure you’re not a joker
Coz you a joke and I’m finding it hard to keep a straight face
I’m the house in a big league Vegas casino,
You a slot machine in the outskirts of Reno
Thought it would be easy caught you by surprise
Now you can only helplessly watch your demise
I’m a naive newbie but it’s lyrically I’m wise
You’ll never beat me even if you had 20 tries
The names idle and you will never forget it
Compare yourself to me you’ll look pathetic

idle

come on, it took me 11 minutes and its my first battle

Check in..
I mentioned earlier i'd have dinner first.
I'll write something now.

'Idle' away on AIM..jeez how original this handle..kid come on..
But creativity comes from life..so guess where his comes from..
Not showin battle record, to prevent this loss displayed its true..
..I'd hide mine..
Just to make it appear I was never in the same thread as you..
Your a anti-bliss to Rb..like reversed bible sayings..ur pure bad..
..& like a christian baby at birth..
i'll wash the shit right of your head!
Never a chance, a glimpse of hope? w/e not even close..
..You smelled victoriy?
No..that was just that shit from a bar back penetratin ur nose!
Enterin' the finisher..hence the play of enter-exit..ur ends next..
..May i give u a tip..never start audio Or poetry..
& just as a whole..quit text!

votes...

V/ Ace, better harder hittin punches, .. other kid was no that good elevate, .. ever heard of a punch?..Ace nice verse some good punches in it, complex, i liked it .. peace.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

One sided..
Ace takes every catergory.. more creative and witty punches, flow was off at times but nothin serious...
Nice original punches throughout, and consistant..
Idle.. good structure/flow but the punches were kinda played.. try to be more original and creative... personal attempts which was tight, but look for witty bars...
All in all an easy victory..

Vote - Straight Ace

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110472

completely one-sided, i thought ace would be battling some 1 a little better!!

ace had harder hitting punches, whilst the other only had a few witty-ish lines!!
he had a better overall battle verse!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

This guys name is straight ace are you sure you’re not a joker
Coz you a joke and I’m finding it hard to keep a straight face
I’m the house in a big league Vegas casino,
You a slot machine in the outskirts of Reno
Thought it would be easy caught you by surprise
Now you can only helplessly watch your demise
I’m a naive newbie but it’s lyrically I’m wise
You’ll never beat me even if you had 20 tries
The names idle and you will never forget it
Compare yourself to me you’ll look pathetic
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not very good here,lacked direction in personals and punches
overall 5/10,this can use some multis and shit like that
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'Idle' away on AIM..jeez how original this handle..kid come on..
But creativity comes from life..so guess where his comes from..
Not showin battle record, to prevent this loss displayed its true..
..I'd hide mine..
Just to make it appear I was never in the same thread as you..
Your a anti-bliss to Rb..like reversed bible sayings..ur pure bad..
..& like a christian baby at birth..
i'll wash the shit right of your head!
Never a chance, a glimpse of hope? w/e not even close..
..You smelled victoriy?
No..that was just that shit from a bar back penetratin ur nose!
Enterin' the finisher..hence the play of enter-exit..ur ends next..
..May i give u a tip..never start audio Or poetry..
& just as a whole..quit text!
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structure was iffy but i liked yer creativity it was good
well you hit harder so 7/10 and yea thats ok
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hit my sig up
vote/S.A.

..I'd hide mine..
Just to make it appear I was never in the same thread as you..
^^ouch....

that describes the battle...
Ace literally ripped this git...his punches and personal's were a ton better
and the flo was slightly on key...while idles wasnt at all....
idle needs to elevate quite a bit before tryin some one this strong again...

vote - ace
-1

Ace takes this easy. Other kid was a real newb obviously. Some shit didn't rhyme, and he had some mad played concepts. idle, try and be more original with your punches and persoanls, and metas. Also your punches were kinda weak and weren't veru creative.
Ace you had a basic verse, but ya had a few nice punches and personals there. Like the line about baptizin. That was ill. My vote goes to Ace. He had a better verse, with more and harder punches, personals, and metas.

Please hit this up with an honest vote guys. People sleepin in frontlines right now. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110722 Thanks you both

Up then..Uppppp
*sigh*
..Guess i need two more votes..

i think idle got this his flow was better and his punches hit harder...
his vocab and wordplay was decent.str8 ace-ur shit had really poor
flow and your punches was not really there...and ur structure
really made ur shit hard to read...and kinda affected ur flow...

Vote:idle

ac merked here,
...did what he had to to beat this kid,
after idle's shit it seem to come rly wak no sense of flow,
so therefore a wak structure also not really any har punches,
ace came and had hard punches a few personals and a good structure,
nice battle but ace merked here,

plz hit my battle against bombz up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx.......pz