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~Yo What Up~ 01-26-04 08:46 PM

Yo What Up vs. Soulfire (150 posts to vote)
 
aight bitch.....i dont wanna any dickridin like our last battle..........even though i got dqed for uppin to many times, thats gay as hell, so lets do this.......

10 lines

no dickriding
no hate
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
no crew votes

verses due tuesday night at 12 est

blind spits

~Yo What Up~ 01-26-04 08:47 PM

CHECKIN IN............

ill prolly start keyin my shit after i see ur check in, but im waitin on u so to start so if u no show i wont waste my shit...........

Soulfire 01-26-04 09:55 PM

Checkin' in... Let's do this. Good luck. May the best man win, son.

Soulfire 01-27-04 12:00 AM

E-yo, u stupid fucka, you try to sound like ur ass is black//
But the only freakin' quality I see in your ass is wack//
The sufficient skills needed to test me you're ass seriously lacks//
Cause findin' my rhymes is like findin' needles in a black haystack//
Guess who's back? Oh, it's that fuckin' Eminem wannabe//
Soulfire right now is more gangsta than ur ever gonna be//
My rhymes flow like da Nile, drivin' a path straight thru ur verse//
I put this dumb bitch in denial, face the facts, ur rhymes are worse//
You think you are Slim Shady, whitey, no one will stand up for you//
Cause they automatically recognize the winner, and bitch it ain't you.//

Soulfire 01-27-04 12:02 AM

Fucka aint even show? He PMed me and everything. Fuckin' typical.

< + > 01-27-04 12:22 AM

eh i no i aint got enough posts to vote but
can you give this battle an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110053
appreciate it

~Yo What Up~ 01-27-04 10:48 PM

^^^will be reported to the ir.....and soulfire........what the hell are u smoking??........rules say verses r do in 2 and half hours from now, so lick my nuts......

check it out.......yo, yo..........

dawg its no question im ill-wit-the-mic, 10-1, and nothins gonna stop me from killin-dis-dyke/
no need to stress im just chillin-tonight, u betta question if u up for dis, cause r u really willin-to-die?/

dawg u just a "dull"-emcee, ya punches r "curved", u claim u got it "locked", but u must have forgot the "whole-key"/
u havent battled so long ya souls-covered-in-debris, but in ya "avy" is the only "fire" people-can-see/

this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/

im one of the devilish-few, i spit fire, and u act like u tough, like some kind of rebel-but-it-aint-true/
dawg let me put it in perspective, on a keyboard im just like a "2", cause honestly dawg, im just a "level-above-U"/

im leavin ya sittin-pissed, cause u tryed to "catch" my rhymes, but u must have forgot to "get-ya-mit"/
so keep spittin-ya-shit, cause literally thats all it is, so do us all a favor and just start slittin-ya-wrists/

EXPLANATIONS -

1st bar - my record is 10-1

2nd bar - locked - key, get it?, dull - curved.....ya know, and his name is soulfire.......doesnt spit it though

3rd bar - he has 2 wins, and at least one is from a dq

4th bar - look at yo keyboard, 2 is one row above the u

5th bar - in baseball u catch the ball wit a mit
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UPPIN DIS SHIT FO VOTES YALL!!!!!!!!!!!!

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 01-27-04 10:57 PM

~yo had some ill multis and metas. Nice punches and personals, and you were creative in how you threw them too.
Soul you came real basic, no creativity and weak attempts at punches. Keep elevatin.
Vote-~Yo What Up~
Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

Soulfire 01-27-04 11:00 PM

Yo What Up,
Good to see ya post. As for the dickridin', I don't know people on this site like that, so you can count on there bein' none again. And as for the time, I just saw it again, but I coulda sworn that u had said Monday. Anyway, good verse by you. Uppin for them votes. #1

LuMiNĂ¥Ry Te-X-t 01-27-04 11:24 PM

This was a semi aite battle..u both are aite..nuthin geat pretty decent but ithink in my eyes..WUTUp took this
hi shsit was just more elevated shit was still aite..but
WAK
BLACK wtf..u cant be rhyin about that shit no more
make sum metaphors make it sic,..add sum wordplay an shit

Vote-WUTUp
Hit the link up dawg ..Pc...Now..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110068

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Specificity

~Yo What Up~ 01-27-04 11:35 PM

^^^thanx for the votes..........

UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME VOTES IN THIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!

cutastraphe 01-28-04 02:02 AM

i felt soul more on this, both had good spits long enuff to spit too. But anyways yo what up u had a good flow, good scheme, couple aight punches and personals but nuthin too shabby. Soul u had a good flow, good structure and scheme, i think your punches were more witty----no wut i just read back over them and i'm changin my vote i'm goin with yo what up he took the personal punches and i felt this line gave him the W [quoute]this guy acts like hes so-wise, u bring all ya shit, but when u gotta show skils, u just got "no-supplies"/
this dude blows-guys, and when u find out this guy has gotten half of wins from dqs its no-surprise/[/quote] lotta nice wrdplay, it flowed smoothly i felt the punch...so vote-yo what up

good battle ya'll
peace

Soulfire 01-28-04 10:11 AM

Uppin #2

~Yo What Up~ 01-28-04 03:41 PM

Uppin # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cmon Hoes, Peep Dis Show Of Skills!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KiLlEr EmCeE 01-28-04 04:24 PM

nice battle.....a lot of strong punches.....dis iz not a dr or hate....but yo wat up takez it......
hiz shyt waz outstretched...but nice........had many hard punches.....nice flow....n ok structure....kinda long but dun wrry....ya punches cleared all dat up
soul- good shyt...nice punches....ok flow......n nice structure.....but i gotta give it 2 YO cuz hiz punches were harder n 4 humour.....
nice battle
no ahte
vote: yo what up.....


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