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KING_LUCIF vs Mad Dog™
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dickriding, Unexplained or Hate votes (I WILL KNOW) No Dickriding D-Thug, mAtW & One-Man-Band cant vote Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 10-14-04 at 09:07 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Mad Dog™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 09:11 AM.
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KING_LUCIF has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-04 09:12 AM.
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Dayum i can't believe it...there's me thinkin ain't no bigger herb than Sinner...and up pops KING_LUCIF...for yet another text bashin...Mad Dog's hangin his mic up for this freak this time...LETS GET IT CRACKIN
(Verse) Dawg u gettin lined up u talkin shit but it's tittle tattle, Sayin shit like "i can't set up this fight" but truth is u too scared to battle, U claim to battle vets...yet u post out a lazy 1 line sentence, U got more losses than sense...so stop jumpin in and get back on the fence, KING_LUCIF...take the KING and the IF away and u got urself another LUC,(Lose) Coz kid u wack and them losses u racked tells me u kinda like abuse, Leave ya legless like alcoholics...but the feeling won't come back, Treats this game like a sport...but wins don't come often for this cat, Ur "spits-are-crap"...if u ever went audio u'll be labelled "shits-bar-wack", "Slit-ur-back" coz u spineless got raped by mAtW now he "ripped-his-crack", I think i'll stop there now coz how many ways do ya say easy win? |
Dayum i can't believe it...there's me thinkin ain't no bigger herb than Sinner...and up pops KING_LUCIF...for yet another text bashin...Mad Dog's hangin his mic up for this freak this time...LETS GET IT CRACKIN
(Verse) Dawg u gettin lined up u talkin shit but it's tittle tattle, Sayin shit like "i can't set up this fight" but truth is u too scared to battle, U claim to battle vets...yet u post out a lazy 1 line sentence, U got more losses than sense...so stop jumpin in and get back on the fence, KING_LUCIF...take the KING and the IF away and u got urself another LUC,(Lose) Coz kid u wack and them losses u racked tells me u kinda like abuse, Leave ya legless like alcoholics...but the feeling won't come back, Treats this game like a sport...but wins don't come often for this cat, Ur "spits-are-crap"...if u ever went audio u'll be labelled "shits-bar-wack", "Slit-ur-back" coz u spineless got raped by mAtW now he "ripped-his-crack", I think i'll stop there now coz how many ways do ya say easy win?... |
ha ha i came back for this time to die nigga ready
ok imma whack this dog like a crumpled newspaper, maddog tryna rap but he aint shit but a faker, ok u off yo chain but u aint gunna get far, cause u too busy humpin legs in tha gay bar... sumones gonna have to make this dog quit barkin, kick you out my garden cause im sick of this fuckwit startin, ha ha tha chuwawa thinkz hes a pitbull, so imma cut his mark ass up dont be to overconfident fool... i can put tha dog down at tha flick of a switch, cause we all know u aint shit but a "bitch", hmm tryna battle me boy come back to reality, u pissed cause u relised ur gurls into bestiality.... when u stand to tha king that means u all alone, u got guts, i like that sumone throw this dog a bone, im tha stuff legends are made of the kings fabled raps, and now u jealous cause u aint gettin shit but table scraps... ok now i bet yo hearts racin my punches hit so hard they caved yo fuckin face in, you dunno who your facin back for revenge and this rhyme im lacin with black on dog discrimination, first ill drown tha doggg then world domination.... OH SHIT quick sumone call the r.s.p.c.a, cause u know this nigga needs to be locked away, u can try and teach him tricks but he just wont stay, u aint foamin at tha mouth thats cum thats how i know your gay... bitch please the doggs scarred hes got knock kneez, cock cheeze u gonna get scratched out cause u got fleez, real g's ...... actually no i think thats enought for an overkill im done thats what i came back for lol |
cmon vote on this shit,
good battle maddog...... |
uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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Before ya say anything Lucy...no-1 will be able to see this until they either post or drop feedback...but why you sayin n***a if u white?
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...ntid=9904&stc=1 |
uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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Voted For: Mad Dog™
aight, mad dog got this... multies were pretty tight, few decent punches, finisher killed it, nice personals, mad dog came pretty strong this time around, he gets my vote..... lucif ya verse lacked creativity, no originality, it was just stuff that we've all seen before, improive ya wordplay n creativity homeboy... mad got this.... peace |
uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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This was feedback posted for Mad Dog™
one sided battle
Mad Dog: almost flawless structure, tight personals, good flow, good punches, a few meta's, hot multi's, good closer, tight opener, good wordplay and creativness. 7.5/10 King_Lucif: Quality over quantity, just cause u spit alot ain't gonna, i wasn't really feeling any of ya verse, punches were bad in my opinoin, the personals were ther but were also bad, i mean u called him chuwawa wow that really does harm to him, there's really no reason to keep explaining this, an all around bad verse, elevate. 3/10 vote - Mad Dog |
Voted For: Mad Dog™
aight this was a pretty tight battle... imma have to go with mad dog on this one tho... hes gonna take this one on structure, wordplay, punches/personals and vocab... Ur "spits-are-crap"...if u ever went audio u'll be labelled "shits-bar-wack", "Slit-ur-back" coz u spineless got raped by mAtW now he "ripped-his-crack", im feelin that closer BIG TIME... threw in some multis and made em hit hard. this was definatly another merking by mad dog. now king lucif your shit was aight, flow was good, some punches and a few personals but i wasnt really feelin the over all verse, the structure was a little off as well... this aint a hate vote hommie, straight up honest vote... you had an ok verse but this just wasnt your day hommie! Maddog takes this one VOTE-MADDOG |
This was feedback posted for Mad Dog™
^good luck with this, from Fiya- reppin' the fam, A.I./
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