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doc_knock 01-03-04 07:56 PM

doc_knock vs. doze
 
10-20 lines
blind spit
due 8 PM eastern time sunday night
no hate, d/r

good luck

Doze 01-03-04 08:12 PM

In..will be ready for tomorrow...



Will you vote on my battle with wonder doc..


Peace

doc_knock 01-04-04 02:51 PM

aight i know i got more than like 5 hours to post...but ima post now.

remember, no feeding, so dont read my verse before you post.

doc_knock 01-04-04 03:02 PM

im bout to smack this bitch up like its spousal abuse/
ima bullDOZE ya ass til you a cryin recluse/
ya chance is about as good as osama for prez/
all the votes goin against you when you fuck with my threadz/
ima fuck u up so bad u gon be institutionalized/
just go ahead and gimme the trophy, my eyes are on the prize/
i could bring the weakest shit eva, im still gona win/
bithc you should know by now, battlin me is a SIN/
i dont fuck around with fools who think they can write/
i type out lyrical gold 400 times a night/
so go ahead doze, brace yoself fo the hit/
ill bitchslap you dead, befo' u even spit/
so whats it gon be? in the face or the chest/
ill give you a choice for my bullet, lay you down to rest/
cuz i dont fuck around with the game, im serious as a nuke/
you can mouth off all ya want, i know you'z a fuckin fluke/
you can sit back, relax, and enjoy the show/
but ill be right over here, givin that shit to ya hoe/
so when its all over and done, and ya life stopped dead/
remember from beyond the grave, doc put the crack in ya head


...good luck.

Doze 01-04-04 04:02 PM

Its like...

This boy thinking he’s a drastic soldier…so I'm knocking him to kingdom come,
Putting him and his family into drastic measures…should rename to unwanted ones/
This kid reckons his personals infect…but boy think off some new lines which touch,
Playing the same games like annual rejects meetings…haha you’re like double dutch/
You don’t have the right intelligence against me...you resemble a fucked up fool,
Boy your typing similar to innocence…cause what you’ve laid I don’t feel at all/
Your lacking the spark to construct basic types…you aint a match made contest,
This motionless newb trying to strike with verses that will never catch any interest/
You’re a fake bore…at least I come out with scripts that let the truth be told,
This is facts…you lay the most fiction with the lack of brain power you hold/
You’re a sure mess…bringing rhymes with poor effects…you definitely hit off track,
Is that your best? LOL…my little sister’s poems are more complex than that wack/

Doc_knock…I would of thought you’d come harder…

Peace…

Uppin...

Doze 01-04-04 04:10 PM

Uppin...




Peace #1

dizzy hommel 01-04-04 04:28 PM

opener: doc_knock
Closer: dok_knock (awesome)
Flow: dok_knock
Enjoyment: dok_knock
Vote: dok_knock
Vote on this honestly please -_-_-

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

Doze 01-04-04 04:31 PM

Do you know what a punches, wordplay and multies are?..manz the votes on this site are terrible..


Uppin still...#2

doc_knock 01-04-04 04:32 PM

dizzy...you have to actually pick the person you want to win in the poll at the top...you have more than 100 posts, you can do it....


uppin............

doc_knock 01-04-04 04:51 PM

oh my GOD IM UPPIN.........
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doc_knock 01-04-04 05:51 PM

uppin...again....
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Doze 01-04-04 06:00 PM

Uppin this...




Peace #3

Doze 01-04-04 07:37 PM

Uppin this...

Please vote fairly...

Peace #3

Doze 01-04-04 08:18 PM

Please vote on this...manz it only takes a little time to vote...please...

Uppin this...

Please vote fairly...

Peace #5

Soulfire 01-04-04 09:04 PM

This was a good battle, but...

Doc: Your wordplay, punches, and multis were hot. You just took this guy down. Okay opener, ridiculous closer, nice metas, the works. Keep elevatin'.

Doze: Your shit was wack, kid. Wordplay and punches were mediocre, opener and closer was nothin' to talk about. Metas were not really there. Keep tryin', though, and keep elevatin'.

Vote: Doc Knock


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