-NERVEZ- vrs.. verbal violence
aight 12 line spit
first to 5 wins due in one hour u spit first~one~ |
I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you]
fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal] you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien] spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium] this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific] what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific] this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear] so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer] like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop] on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot] lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent] i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT] holla back |
i thought it was due in an hour? .............your turn
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aight yo sorry if i didnt do this last night but i had to get off early but heres ma verse
if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse// u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse// dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez// this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves// crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent// damn son ya breath stink try some trident// i could out flow him even if i was mild violence// bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united// he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend// he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded// he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies// ima whole new era of raps endagerd species// ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch//~one~ holla bak |
aight yall could be uppin them votes now
~one~... |
-NERVEZ-'s Verse
I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you] fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal] ...that was stupid... you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien] spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium] the alien part was stupid..the 2nd line was aight.. this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific] what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific] what the fuck in the water out there? <---made no sense this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear] so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer] shit was aight like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop] on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot] shit was aight oo... lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent] i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT] sht was aight..*a lil' bit 6.7/10 Verbal Violence's Verse if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse// u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse// shit was good... dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez// this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves// shit was ok..a lil' bit bad crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent// damn son ya breath stink try some trident// shit was aight i could out flow him even if i was mild violence// bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united// shit was good he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend// he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded// shit was aight he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies// ima whole new era of raps endagerd species// shit wasn't good ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch// ...stupid... 7.2/10 Winner: verbal violence |
wow,this is filled with wack punches ...
"like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot" ^wtf ? ------- "ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent damn son ya breath stink try some trident" hmmmmm,nope ------ wasnt feelin this battle at all ... Verbal came harder with punches and some personals. Nervez u just had flow,sordof ... Verbal came over so he gers my overall vote ... |
yea.. pretty much i feel like they do.. nervez you had flow, but there wasent really any other attributes i could point out about the verse.. no beef at all..
you didnt throw that many punches that hit harder then a love tap.. verbal ur verse coo i guess.. but you need to work on your structure a lil bit.. ur lines were a lil bit stretched, but it could jsut my taste.. and you used verbal hella many time in that shit :P.. v/verbal |
yo...nervez man... u had flow...cuple nice rhymes
verbal... a lot wuz messed by both but ur linez needa shrink a bit..nice rhymes tho v=verbal |
yo both ya'll shyt was played as hell.....BUT verbal ya lines r kinda stretched.... n nerves u had some nice flow n punches
vote- nerves.. but yo eitha of u too wanna battle?? holla back @ ya boi ~WuN~ |
Verbal Violence...def took this one he had a beeter flow and a whole lot more multis.. his punches landed more too..
both did a good job though..i enjoyed it.. |
aight 1-4 uppin for one more votes or some votes...~one~
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nerves ur verse...
I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you] fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal] no rhyme.. its ok 6.5/10 you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien] spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium] 2nd line.. okay first sucks 5/10 this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific] what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific] 1st line is wack 2nd line is ok.. 5.5/10 this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear] so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer] ive heard the carreer line too much 5/10 like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop] on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot] one of ur better lines.. 7/10 lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent] i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT] ur best line.. 7.5/10 if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse// u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse// sucked. 4/10 dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez// this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves// how do you get served on the net? good 6.5/10 crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent// damn son ya breath stink try some trident// structure and flow are off.. bad second line.. 5/10 i could out flow him even if i was mild violence// bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united// good line. *giggles* 7/10 he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend// he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded// another good line.. 7/10 he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies// ima whole new era of raps endagerd species// nice i liked second line.. 8/10 ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch// overall i think we can see that verbal merked nerves. v/verbal hit my sig up |
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