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souljah vs sabotage
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-24-05 at 05:31 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 05:33 AM.
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When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window,
The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo, Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please, Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees, Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,* Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,** I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title, Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital, Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most, All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast... *his name is in black and blue **left DM to be in RAW |
last line= 5 letters out of the letters that make up his name can be rearranged to spell boast
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sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 09:19 PM.
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straight keyed
This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’ When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD* You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to** And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime *MD stands for medical doctor **people call God, Jah |
uppin this.........................................
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Voted For: Souljah
When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window, The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo, ^^wak Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please, Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees, ^^weak...... Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,* Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,** ^^Nice...ur best bar I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title, Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital, ^^whack Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most, All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast ^^weak nameplay Well,you had too much basic shit about killin or beatin him.It's okay to do dat,but use metas or sumtin...not basic shit.Only hot bar was the personal one.Everything else suked. This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’ ^^^weak and whack When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD* ^^^LOl...nice You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting ^^^didn't rhyme,stretched as fuq,whack This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to** And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you ^^^nice..... Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime ^^^nice You had some real nice punches in there.Only thing that suked about ur ver was that renting one.But besides that...this was ahot verse.U got this easily. Vote-Sabotage(vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194845 Vote switched |
Voted For: sabotage
This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’ wack opener When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD* okay You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting not so great here This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to** And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you nope Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime lie & dime.. hardly rhyme When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window, The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo, decent Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please, Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees, nope Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,* Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,** weak I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title, Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital, weak Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most, All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast... closer was aight overall sabotage took this one.. punches were just harder hitting.. but both of u need to elevate.. add some personas in ur rhymes also.. |
^ my first 2 barz were personals...pay more attention next time.....
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i didn.. but i didn't like 'em
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Voted For: sabotage
souljah: When you fucked wid me my patience went out da window, The only time you spit dope's when you're deep tokin indo, ^^^I DONT KNOW IF U PEEP OTHER BATTLES BUT DA DOPE LINES R PLAYED FAM Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please, Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees, ^^^??????WHUT LOL Yo i'd beat you down but you already black n blue,* Nigga move i'll murk your ass quicker than you hop crews,** ^^DECENT...BEST LINE OF YA VERSE I'll leave you feelin smaller than the apos' in your title, Breakin you down til da life support machine be vital, ^^^NAH Nigga you a dignified shit talker at the most, All talk, 63 per cent of your name spells boast... ^^^LOL .....DIS WAS SUPER WACK sabotage: This kid is unoriginal, he stole his name from that ‘Nolia’ Kid Fold ya quick..you got no muscle that’s why I say this ‘Souljah’s Slim’ ^^^DIS WOULD OF BEEN HOTT..IF SLIM & KID RYHMED When I look at your crew’s roster..Documented Murder looks empty Call the medics..after this battle DM is gonna need an MD* ^^NAH You got no kind of punches and nothing to say against me Cause Souljah borrows other peoples lines..so its safe to say the he’s renting ^^^DIS DONT RYHME This faggot is already died ‘Jah’ is where I sent his ‘Soul’ to** And I don’t have to play the people game for RV to see that I own you ^^^LOL...OKAY Just another internet gangster..stop livin the lie Cause the only time you got a 9’s..when you holding a penny short of a dime ^^^TERRIBLE WORDIN.... V/SABOTAGE...HE HAD AT LEAST ONE GOOD LINE IN HIS VERSE...SOULJAH U HAD NO CREATIVITY NO PUNCHLINES YA WHOLE VERSE WAS WACK FAM RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL VOTE ON A NIGGA BATTLE |
I shoulda said if people don't understand anything in the battle don't vote.
Directing petty beef at me,oh my days, my nigga please, Yo i don't need the family, on my jays i'll bring you to your knees, ^^^??????WHUT LOL you obviously don't know what's been goin on recently, and you don't understand uk slang so why'd ya bother? "Oh my days" is how we say "oh my god" where i come from "On my jays" means "by myself" or "on my own" where i come from "The family" refers to Doc Murder Anyway uppin for more votes |
yeah but u stil suck so shut up.....................
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Voted For: sabotage
its like dis.....i wasnt feelin souljah at all...but i'll still break it down... opener: neither: wack ass openers yall, not good, not good at all lmfao closer: Sab: damn, funny shit right there, lol punches: Sab: yeah, Jah had sum punches but Sab's hit much harder to me persoanls: Jah: only had one, but Sab had none, damn multies: tie: yup a full tie between yall, weren't a lot of them but enuff to get u thru metas: Sab: yours stood out and Jah's were jus blah to me my vote/ Sabotage AND YOU BETTA RETURN THA FAVA...LINK IN SIG (PEEP THA BATTLE WIT M.ER.C)...DO IT OR I'LL DELETE MY VOTE...HAVE A NICE DAY |
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