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N LitEnd (3-1) vs. FuE-Xion (2-0)
check in by wednesday
verses due friday, 12 am eastern time.. read LLL rules, agree on line limit, have fun . . |
Lets Go 16 This Time.
Votes: Jacent Vs. Allegory MeNTiLL Vs. KoNcEpT Aisle 5 Vs. Def Con Horud Vs. Aus Largo Vs. Av |
theres nobody else left to battle. I switched u with mense and com because the hadnt checked in yet. but mense is in jail and therefore cant show up .. so you'll have to deal with this match again...
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I’ll Get Str8 Into The Battle, & Dismantle This Fusion
You See, Science Is Simple… …1 Part Recycled & The Other Is Bitten…That = FuE-Xion!! Yes You Did Beat Me Last Week, Go Write Half A Verse On It Same Predictable Shit, ‘Cept This Weeks Predictions Mean Shit! Leth Wants Me 2 Unlock The Dopeness, FuE’s The Key Don’t Get Ahead Of Yourself Fag… …This Aint An Opportunity For You To Try & Enter Me! Quote:
See, You’re A Lost Cause, Hidin Behind A Front, So Step Out Coz FuE’s Never Right… …Well I’m Ambidextrous So Watch Me Leave Him Left Out!! I Was In Wits End, Was Dope, Till All The Dope Left Pussies Now I See You On The Roster… & Its Clear To See That They Resulted To Recruiting Rookies!! We……Appreciate……Ya……Bars……That……Look…..Like…….This Reason Is, We Catch Our Breath From Ya Pauses In Wackness! What Separates Me & You…Is All ^^^ The Dopeness Above And When Lookin At Ya Profile… …It Read, Male, Single…And Looking For Internet Love!! I’ll Put An End To This Without Giving A Fuck You Got Cardiovascular Problems, No Stroke Of Luck!! |
Your The Colostomy Of RB, Because N LitEnds Known
..For Being A Sack Of Shit! My Punches Leave You In Stars, Cuz Its Not Only Your Life..... .....I Put Your Asterisk!! Wack Bitch, I'll Take Your First Two Letters ..And Hand You N L!! Battle Me? Read Your Sig, Your Beliefs Rot....... ..I Wondered Whats That Smell!! Last Week You Failed, I Ripped Ya Step Away Before Your Done.. ..And Go Back To Poetic Sciptures!! You Drop Alot Of Shit!! Your The LLL's Handless Babysitter!! When It Comes To N LitEnd And A Microphone Its Like Halftime At The Super Bowl....A Malfunction!! Ya Still Rusty, Im Winning This Race Against A Handicapped Man Runnin! You...Cunning?? HA! I'll Rob Your Computer ...Intel N LitEnd He Lost! Your Included In A Wack Crew, And Your Wack Drops Should Be Police Documents On A Wall.......Against The Law!! You've Already Lost To Me, A "Newbie" ...So How Can Your Name Be True! Your On The Brink Of Life, Cuz Death Is The Only Time ..You'll Pull Through!! I Read Your Verse And Realized You Shoulda Put.... .."FuE-xIoN Wins" In Your Heading! Because I'm Like Walter And Leth.... Quote:
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Sorry Fue, I wasn't feelin this drop for shit, it was waaay forced, and was a lot of failed witty attempts, dunno dogg, I really didn't like any of those lines, the structure was way hard to follow, you need to stop that structure. Four lines for one bar is not nessecary at all.
N Litend, your verse was aight, you had a few dope punches. The catch your breath line and the recruiting rookie lines were nice, everything else was decent. Enough for the win. Vote - N LitEnd Psst, vote on me vs Def Con, we only have three votes. :( That goes to Fue, Mystik voted on mine already. |
^Blah....Structure Has Nothing To Do With It
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Hahahah Nlitend murderd him W/ punches.. =)
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Yes actually it does, the shit's annoying as hell to read man. It fucks up the flow and shit, makes it hard to read. Even so, your punches were sub par. |
Still Only 1-0?
Vote You Bastards! |
I Totally Agree With Aisle, That Structure
Is Ghey As Fuck. I Really Dont Feel Like Breaking Tis Down Cuz I think NLE Took This quite Easily. Like Aisle Said Some Of Fue's Attempts At Being Witty Failed Pretty Bad. And Mystik Punched Solid Through Out. All In All I Think FuE Got Clowned. V/Mystik Mind |
win some lose some i guess......i will stick with my old structure from now on....lol ;) good battle N....no point in me voting in other battles....seeing as i lost anyway....
p.s. this is intentional... peace |
^you still have to vote on 3 battles regardless
I was mentioned in both verses.....dope Smoka's structure took a lot away from his verse Punches were equal, sum ok, sum wack on both sides but N takes this with better flow and harder hitting punches Vote - NLitEnd |
FUCK!! i have to vote on three anyway....ok i'll edit them here....
1. the one in the check in... 2. Feeble Minded vs. Walter Wall 3. Born To Kill vs. Sand peace |
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