Illist vs ELite.
 

Battle Rules:

8 lines.
No crew.
Hate.
Dick ride.
Bites.
Etc.

Good Luck -n- please don't ho show.. thank you.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-21-05 at 08:00 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 08:12 PM.

I accepted n dropped, u havent even accepted? thought u said you wanted a quick one?

ELite. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 08:17 PM.

chea good verse illist, lets get some votes on this

chea bump this once again, since evidently niggas is blind...

looks like we never gettin votes on this one homie lol

Wurd. ^

votes take way too damn long to come on this site.

Voted For: Illist

Illist

Trust..It's your time, this kid's not 180 degrees homie..
& this kid's so outta line he's turnin perpendicular on me
Cool..
Prepare to fall off kid, no1 rocked you like me, dont worry
fuck writin ya verse.. I'll have this mothafucka droppin stories
Nah..
& your losses are chewed up by this, just watch me go..
truth is el-eats so much..
...........................Yet he still can't drop any heavy flow!
Didn't connect..
Ya not above or equal to me, watch him flip these^..
Anythin besides a win against u is failure..
...........So if i tiedye i kill myself, like suicidal hippies
Decent..

Achilles

kidd i'm sonnin you quick, and to feel pussy...you jus rubs on ya dick
i'll clap u then split, either way u gettin "popped" like a pimple or zit!!
Played as hell..
remind me of clits, cuz illist can 'catch da yeast' so i'm 'pitchin bread'
now he gettin fed, cuz no1 "thinks" of him but aint missin their heads!
Nah..
rushin me to drop so u lose fast? and he dont fight cuz he lose clash
wanted 2 "Roc" so bad, he gave his 'car wings' & literally 'flew dash'!
Decent..
told me he wanna battle me, and ya fuckin baby raps jus rattle me...
cuz lyrically, u couldnt "GUIDE MY FLOWS" as "moses managin me"!!!
Not a punch..

Overall, Illist had one good punch and one decent one. The other punches didn't connect. Achilles had one decent punch, and the others weren't that good at all. One of his other ones were played, and the other ones didn't connect at all. Illist just had the better overall verse. He had better concepts, more punches connected, and better wordplay. That's why he gets my vote.

Vote - Illist

chea i was off thats aight though, good look votin...0-1

bump

Voted For: Illist

illist-Your verse was structured good, you had good flow..your wordplay was nicely set up and incorporated...had some good punches and personals....your verse came hard and was appealing to the reader...overall 6/10

Elite. -Your verse was structured good but becuz your worded your punches and shit wrong it flowed bad...you had some played wordplay and punches....u worded them very childishly....gutta be more creative and up your game...overall 4/10

v/illist....

rtf in sig within 48 hours or this vote goes bye bye

This was feedback posted for Illist
 

good battle to both of you big ups jsut showing love s work on the structure a bit u too illist not bad props
jsut stopped by to show love
bump

word.... thanks for the feed.






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