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Tha Q. 11-03-05 11:22 PM

Brand New..."Ghetto iLL"...holla atcha boy
 
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^^Click on "Ghetto iLL"


Beat: Arkane Productions

Hook: All Q...yea, me again singin...lol

Verses: 1 & 2 Tha Q




Holla atcha boy

*PS...Both of these verses are "recycled" from earlier songs...I jus thought they sounded nice on this beat.



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213560
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213445

L.E 11-03-05 11:30 PM

Listening...

Beat starts off...haha...it's decent...NIce flow, nice deilivery...damn nice multies in the beginnning...

Quality is mad dope too haha. I went to The Source today to see if they would be getting that mic in, and I am waiting for them to call me. Word.

Good track man...keep it up. A great mixtrack tape.

Word. :thumbup:

KOOL COL-B 11-03-05 11:33 PM

werd, this shit iz dope. dope beat, dope lyrics. dope flow, all that shit. sumthin id burn off n listen 2, u know, werd

Implicit 11-03-05 11:52 PM

ok first off i love ArkaneBeats. dope beats with that old school feel to it.

chorus - singing aint too bad. i think its cool with you kinda rappin on it. it blends quite well. i like what you say as well.verse

when you rap i like your flow. real good. is this the thing you sent me the other day? yeah it is. yeah this is cool. at the beginning of both your verses you got some good multies in there.

quality is bomb. i guess ima have to go pick up one of those USB mics. prescnce is good as well.


good track overall. i actually downloaded this. and i usualy never download anything off the net

L. Veracity 11-04-05 12:31 AM

beat's hawt my nigga...

you singin' in the back sounds pretty nyce my dude...lyrics are hard nigga, good shit...didn't like ya flow at the very beginning how you choppped it up but as it went on you smoothed it out...hook's da shit man, hott track :thumbup:

Willa 11-04-05 01:10 AM

quality good you got that nice mic lol props
flow like ive said in all of ur other songs never really went off that i heard so no hate here
beat not really feeling it kinda plain not my type of beat
hook loving it how you say shti over him mad dope loving it
presence loved how you made words stand out u seemed layed back/ kinda hype lol
lyrics pretty good no complaints props on this
overall i was feeling the hook the best loved it

ILL GEE 11-04-05 01:13 AM

yeah.... i see you using that mic to ya advantage... i'm gettin' mine soon...lol....

i told ya already on aim... this shyt is pure fire... i love the topic, the beat, ya flow, and ya added that singing shyt... nice touch.... a huge step away from ya regular adlibbing tactics...lol... you are a true emcee, dawg and kats can sleep if they want.. i recognize skill and you can prolly sell some shyt if you put it out there like that... straight underground circuit.. i'd buy it... 9/10... holla

RichD 11-04-05 04:49 AM

hmmmm.....i aint got much to say, that shit was RAW, i jus think u should turn ur singin up from the bg on tha chorus.....haha, but im feelin that shit. i think i noticed u fall off once.....but other than that...clean....

9/10

PrahJect 11-04-05 06:48 AM

Listenin...beat is dope...quality is superb...dleivery on the mic is very nice..presence is the best Ive ever heard on any of yourre tracks..lyrics on the first verse are dope..I like youre singin as a dubbing, 2nd verse...flow is immense...damn..this is sick...lyrics good..this is a quality track..ima have to say this track is 10/10...I love the hook...you keepin it like that or is akay on that?

Tha Q. 11-04-05 10:14 AM

^^^word...appreciate the love my nigga



stay up BD



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Kriptic 11-04-05 10:39 AM

ncie man.. i liked this shit..came out really good, liek the beat alot ..keep it up man

Tha Q. 11-04-05 03:24 PM

^^preciate the feed


and I will RTF



holla



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Triple_N 11-04-05 06:17 PM

yea good/original beat choice......the dubs on ya rhyming words is jus a tad loud.....flow is cool......delivery could be a bit more animated.....I like its laid back style but u coulda did a lil more wit it.......the hook....is diff.....it fits the beat.....the singing in the background would be better if it was a lil more layered sounding....but overall good track..enjoyed it....there is lil things I can knitpick at here an there but if people gotta knitpick to find flaws in the track then u on point..solid song...keep dropping good shit

Youngandreckless 11-04-05 06:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Triple_N
yea good/original beat choice......the dubs on ya rhyming words is jus a tad loud.....flow is cool......delivery could be a bit more animated.....I like its laid back style but u coulda did a lil more wit it.......the hook....is diff.....it fits the beat.....the singing in the background would be better if it was a lil more layered sounding....but overall good track..enjoyed it....there is lil things I can knitpick at here an there but if people gotta knitpick to find flaws in the track then u on point..solid song...keep dropping good shit
I agree wit him but i think that this isn't one of ya best drops it was dope but its not a cover song

but u doin ya thing im not mad at that lol hit up my thread 47 Carter

J.D 11-05-05 04:38 AM

werd, this is fuckin hot shit, doesnt get better than this, seriously. you just came in so well and just rode the beat perfectly, and your multis are fuckin amazin! before i hurd this, i thought "heres the best", which i got on my ipod now (i fuckin luv that track!), woz your best, but now i've changed my mind completely, this is pure dopeness. 10/10


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