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5. TEF (7-6) vs. 6. Comedian (11-2)
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Yeah ok should be a good rematch
good luck |
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^ ^we don’t like your dry ass punches, we wanna sock you for spite Only Quotes you’ll see in this weeks Mag…if Faime S, drop something tight Won Cyphers cause Fletcher didn’t post, now fag I’ma beat cha Actual battles you drop more BULLSHIT.. than when Ben Wallace has Diarrhea Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines Laid an egg your last title match ya wack flows made my head hurt You champing this league, we'll neva see like Eskimo’s in the desert You shoulda lost to Cocaine last week how did you get here rookie? Votewise…. ...you have a dickriding ring, Hey Comedian you get your Clit pierced pussy? You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news You no super hero bitch ass geek you gotta be startled Sign out!! Only Comics we know that's worth checking for is probably Marvel |
i'm tearin his phase, you don't want it with me, i'll bury this gay
i'll get carried away with beating you... you'll just get carried away take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it i'll wreck ya shit - next to my thought is the fact he never gon' drop it Secret to the day he dies... he'll be the gayest skeleton in the closet i'd rock ya shit, but it's already fossilized, old concepts are wack man drop the guise, those punches are a throwback... into the trash can rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house it's sad; only the lames'll doubt that you don't belong in this shit since DaTrus is too scared to give you the boot, i'll stomp ya with it those generic verses aren't working... you aren't taking this dyke i've battered & bruised you before... that's why you aching to fight excuse the lateness. |
Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines vs i'll wreck ya shit - next to my thought is the fact he never gon' drop it Secret to the day he dies... he'll be the gayest skeleton in the closet rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house This was an okay battle...Im sick as shit so I dont feel like quoting much. To me, the trailer home lines are ALWAYS funny...though its seems like a flip on the concept feebs used about 2 weeks ago...it was still funny. Tef had some weak lines with a lot of fillers n some bad wordplay. I wasn't really feeling the line I quoted from him too much. just a bit. str8 battle though V/ Comedian RTF battle vs N.Tavarez |
I gotta start reading more battles. Seems I think everything's played but my own stuff. Thx for voting. I'll hit up your battle tomorrow.
1-0 Good battle, TEF. |
You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool
Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news decent vs... take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it witty rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house lmao TEF didnt have a bad verse, but the poor wording really effected his punches. even though he only had one quotable, he had other decent punches. but comedian was pretty funny, he made me laugh a few times. so v - comedian for an entertaining verse. |
Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind
So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines vs take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house i seen alot of potential quotables in this battle that for wording issues or just straight irrelevant set ups didnt work, so this couldve been alot closer than the quotes say comedian slightly edged it out cuz that trailer punch couldve easily been left out but good shit from both v/ com |
Comedian: "take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it" Vs. TEF: "Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news" This battle wasn't really that good, Comedian just used concepts and I felt that his verse had no personals included. TEF actually focused his concepts and punches towards Comedian with decent personals but TEFs novice stage of wording took away from his verse. Vote - TEF, his verse was just more hard hitting for me, and it focused more on dissing Comedian, not just wording witty concepts. |
TEF:
Cheated me our last battle Homeless fuck!.. I mauled your behind So yeah I get a Bum Rap, But I still don’t understand all of your lines You'll get your goons all on your side, my gun will empty 3 fool Because you Sway so fuckin much, Your complaints work for MTV news vs. Comedian: i'm tearin his phase, you don't want it with me, i'll bury this gay i'll get carried away with beating you... you'll just get carried away take lessons kid, the championship bout is where i'm destined bitch and since your head is gassed... to get there fast i'm gonna step on it i'll wreck ya shit - next to my thought is the fact he never gon' drop it Secret to the day he dies... he'll be the gayest skeleton in the closet rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house I got Comedian dominatin' this battle. Even the lines I didn't quote, were harder than some of TEF's quotables in my eyes. TEF just needs better wording on his punches and set-ups. V/ Comedian |
nuthin
vs i'd rock ya shit, but it's already fossilized, old concepts are wack man drop the guise, those punches are a throwback... into the trash can rape his clout, i be dropping bombs that'll have you slayed in bouts my punches hit home... - and they'll probably rock your trailer house v/com....this wasnt a bad one i quoted shit i thought was above average..tef you are get better fo'real but not on coms level ya'll had some nice lines but com came wit shit i thought was funnier an hit harder |
Hey trus
I aint got time to link my votes I'ma be gone this weekend but I voted in Keyed VS Eye Que Faime S Quotez VS Phil Benjamin The Champ match and Your Battle |
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Comedian WINS 12-2 TEF LOSES 7-7 |
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