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lyric vs king~dipset
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All Boxed In Im all Boxed In With Noone Around I Know you here the Echo Of my Scared Sounds You Act as if You dont here Me, While I Yell Out In fear You Close your eyes and Shut your door, And cover your ears Im All Boxed in with No way Out, As I Search for Light In a Dark room With Enemies That I cant see so I Cant fight They Torment my mind as They Push Me side to side I try to Duck in The corner But There Is no Place to Hide Im all Boxed In, with No room to breathe And The sweet Song of Lovers continue to concieve The Thoughts that I Had of escaping This Earthly Hell In This Box I Can Only Inhale...........without My Exhale Im all Boxed In, With my Life on the line Ive put up a good fight but it seems as if im out of time out of time but not out of mind, As I continue to Panic The Soul in Depression is Like A flower being Organic Im all Boxed in, on a one way Road One way im faced, and my Motives In a one way mode Where The Streets Are narrow but my lane is paved in gold And the Truth is the Lie And the Lie Is untold |
All Boxed In Look at me, what do you see, is it a normal appearance? Society, has been discreet, worried no one will hear it I fear it may be my fault, as doubt's shadow engulfs my soul My goal is to fit in, because an outcast can never be whole So I blend into the crowd, and nod my head to all that’s said A mass of black suits, repetitious clones who bleed red Same routines every day, monotone voices surround me Rain clouds follow me, mimic my life plane and dreary I walk amongst the crowd, head down to avoid the embarrassment Of what I hide inside, I cry and try to carry repent Wish to let it all out, but I would be quickly rejected Cast down from the ladder, where uniformity's respected Feelings are weighing me down, but I make sure they hide So I keep all forms of emotion, safely locked inside Won’t ever let them out, those different are the enemy Stopped growing before potential, and what I was meant to be Divided what was given, and what was sent to me A blanket of insecurity, covering my true identity They try to break free, takes all my will to stop them Everything I ever wanted, remains all boxed in |
ok king this was a good drop here nicely put vocab couldve been better you gave a very simplist image though ive seen this before in the league from others basically what you said you said and it wasnt a very deep picture there wasnt no real wittyness to it it was a good poem i just felt that it lacked something i cant really place my finger on.
lyric good vocab a very good drop you talked about basic life and being trapped in the same shit of suits and lifes trials every date but wanting to do something else a topic everyone especially hip hop artist can relate to there was madd alterary meaning in your shit and madd emotion was here beneath the words you basically had what i felt kings poem was missing and that made yours better. good drops from both here but i was really feeling lyrics more . vote-lyric |
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this was a good topic, i liked it... both of yall did pretty well on it, both could have done better but i was feelin lyrics more... he had better immagry and vocab than king... no hate but lyric takes this one..
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Lyric Wins...CLosed
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