3. R-Rated Vs. 43. Ambient
 

Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

12 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

here is my breakdown

r...

I Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
8.5 decent, be done a lot but still a touch of originality
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
8.5 haha, that was decent
Each Bar Had The Same Concept..Those Fake Punches Can't Harm Me..
You Ass..Hit With Lyrical Uppercuts..Only Time Your Mind Above Body..
7 hmm dumb, waiste of lines
My Konetic Force Will Transfuze Your Elect-Wrongs Back Into Ions..
Your Styles So Old..Come On Kid Bout Time To Let By Gones Be By Gones..
7 that has been used, i've read it before, infact i think it was on rapmusic...
Foreign Like Scion..Creativity Compact and Thought Patterns Are Wack..
So Wack..You've Been Compared To Some Of Vanilla Ice's Tracks!!..
6 blah, really an ice diss, seriously r let him rip, he's been used to death
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..
8.5 decent decent....all in all you are trendously better then this verse, well actually pretty much just three of the bars were really wack and you are better then those...

AMbient

R-Rated i peeped ya battles... seriously, kid you got me laughin'
claim u a "dreamcast throwback" s'right, since they went outta fashion8 haah, pretty good start
u aint making' money OUT of this...frankly u'll just be OUT...... joy!!!
But since u'll be throwing one in this battle... u can be my towel boy
7 blah blah blah, towel boy, water boy, played, unless done differently, this was done the same...
see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
8 haha, that's truth, used a little bit but truth all the way
sigs says ur gonna freeze me... guess jack frost is gettin' played
chuz any punch u throw.............. was pulled outta the ice age
7.5 blah at best
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
10 hahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha, hahahahahah, hahah ,, haha,,, haha ,,,,ha
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed
9 good stuff, last two bars were the only real standouts, r had one that was good but still not on this level...good shit

Vote AMbient

I Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..


Vs.

see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed

Vote: ~R~ for comming with the more personal approach...

Each had both good openers and good closers... so once again i had to refer to the middle of the verse... and when i broke it down in my head i came up with R-Rated comming out on top due to his personal punches hitting harder then any of Ambients punches... i mean


You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..

^That alone took most of the bar in ambients verse and he had 3 more good bars other then that one so i dont see how R-Rated would lose this one...


but ambi did have this good one... have to say this is the best line of the match but it doesnt mean that the best bar takes the battle its the whole verse

C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10


Nicely done the both of you

and sorry for the confusion ambi

R-Rated i peeped ya battles... seriously, kid you got me laughin'
claim u a "dreamcast throwback" s'right, since they went outta fashion
good personal funny nice opener
u aint making' money OUT of this...frankly u'll just be OUT...... joy!!!
But since u'll be throwing one in this battle... u can be my towel boy
no personal played and corny
see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
agreed very herbish doing that lol
sigs says ur gonna freeze me... guess jack frost is gettin' played
chuz any punch u throw.............. was pulled outta the ice age
played corny boo ok personal
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
lol this was funnypersonal again and u made a good punch nice
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed
yup great personal nobody really noticed him since hes came back lol

I Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
not really a good personal played stop praising yourself
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
pretty good
Each Bar Had The Same Concept..Those Fake Punches Can't Harm Me..
You Ass..Hit With Lyrical Uppercuts..Only Time Your Mind Above Body..
wack personal blah
My Konetic Force Will Transfuze Your Elect-Wrongs Back Into Ions..
Your Styles So Old..Come On Kid Bout Time To Let By Gones Be By Gones..
nothing special ok
Foreign Like Scion..Creativity Compact and Thought Patterns Are Wack..
So Wack..You've Been Compared To Some Of Vanilla Ice's Tracks!!..
played and dumb
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..
ok punch pretty good

vote ambient rs personals didnt compare ambient cam wittier good battle from both though

Ambient
R-Rated i peeped ya battles... seriously, kid you got me laughin'
claim u a "dreamcast throwback" s'right, since they went outta fashion
decent opener was feelin this.. 8/10
u aint making' money OUT of this...frankly u'll just be OUT...... joy!!!
But since u'll be throwing one in this battle... u can be my towel boy
nice wordplay, towel boy.. str8 punch.. 8/10
see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
creative..... str8.. 7/10
sigs says ur gonna freeze me... guess jack frost is gettin' played
chuz any punch u throw.............. was pulled outta the ice age
wack... 0/10
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
omfg the best line... 10/10
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed
coulda been better, but aight.. 7/10
40/60 ~66.7%

R Rated
Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
nice punch one of ur best lines.. 9/10
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
not bad coulda been betta... 8/10
Each Bar Had The Same Concept..Those Fake Punches Can't Harm Me..
You Ass..Hit With Lyrical Uppercuts..Only Time Your Mind Above Body..
aight.... 7/10
My Konetic Force Will Transfuze Your Elect-Wrongs Back Into Ions..
Your Styles So Old..Come On Kid Bout Time To Let By Gones Be By Gones..
nice, lol.. sounds familiar tho.. 8/10
Foreign Like Scion..Creativity Compact and Thought Patterns Are Wack..
So Wack..You've Been Compared To Some Of Vanilla Ice's Tracks!!..
terribly played... 0/10
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..
omg best closer, mos def.. 9/10
41/60 ~68.3%

v/ R Rated good luck to both, no hate..

Hmmm......honestly, I wasn't feeling either verse. I thought Ambi had a couple of ok lines, but nothing more than that. R's verse didn't seem like it had any. No hate, just how I saw it. R's verse seemed like it was written in a topical style, and I just wasn't feeling it. Punches suffered from it.....sorry man...

Vote - ambient

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback.

ambient:

R-Rated i peeped ya battles... seriously, kid you got me laughin'
claim u a "dreamcast throwback" s'right, since they went outta fashion
^^ good opener 8/10
u aint making' money OUT of this...frankly u'll just be OUT...... joy!!!
But since u'll be throwing one in this battle... u can be my towel boy
^^dope bar good consistentcy 8/10
see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
^^you keep coming good every bar 7/10
sigs says ur gonna freeze me... guess jack frost is gettin' played
chuz any punch u throw.............. was pulled outta the ice age
^^wack 4/10
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
^^dope bar 8/10
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed
^^reallll dope personal good punch in the set up line 9/10

overall : 44/60 (73%)

r-rated:

I Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
^^decent personal OK opener 6/10
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
^^dope personal 9/10
Each Bar Had The Same Concept..Those Fake Punches Can't Harm Me..
You Ass..Hit With Lyrical Uppercuts..Only Time Your Mind Above Body..
^^decent but played concept acouple people used stuff like this against MAB members 6/10
My Konetic Force Will Transfuze Your Elect-Wrongs Back Into Ions..
Your Styles So Old..Come On Kid Bout Time To Let By Gones Be By Gones..
^^not really a punch 3/10
Foreign Like Scion..Creativity Compact and Thought Patterns Are Wack..
So Wack..You've Been Compared To Some Of Vanilla Ice's Tracks!!..
^^ice ice baby... decent bar 7/10
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..
^^good closer coulda been worded better 8/10

overall : 39/60 (65%)

vote: ambient

Ambient

R-Rated i peeped ya battles... seriously, kid you got me laughin'
claim u a "dreamcast throwback" s'right, since they went outta fashion
Wow.. This is played to hell.. 3/10
u aint making' money OUT of this...frankly u'll just be OUT...... joy!!!
But since u'll be throwing one in this battle... u can be my towel boy
Forced concept to the max.. i guess it was somewhat creative.. 5/10
see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
check and chest dont rhyme.. but besides that.. i guess this was an attempted personal.. though it came out totally garbage.. didnt word it right at all.. 5/10
sigs says ur gonna freeze me... guess jack frost is gettin' played
chuz any punch u throw.............. was pulled outta the ice age
If only i hadnt used a concept like this in July.. and it was still played then.. 2/10
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
Your first decent attempt to come somewhat witty.. punch still didnt connect that hard though.. 6/10
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed
Holy fuck is this played too.. Not another.. 'you left, i didnt notice!' punch.. just when i thought ur verse topped the played-o-meter you drop this gayness.. 1/10

Overall - 22/60

R-Rated

I Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
Avatar punches are played.. but, this still had a little connection.. decent attempt at a personal.. 5/10
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
This isnt worded very well, but a pretty good personal nonetheless.. 7/10
Each Bar Had The Same Concept..Those Fake Punches Can't Harm Me..
You Ass..Hit With Lyrical Uppercuts..Only Time Your Mind Above Body..
Without the 'You ass' at the beginning this would have sounded better.. but, ive never even read any of their battles, but i can tell already Mind Above Body punches are played.. 4/10
My Konetic Force Will Transfuze Your Elect-Wrongs Back Into Ions..
Your Styles So Old..Come On Kid Bout Time To Let By Gones Be By Gones..
Lol.. Best punch in this battle.. about time some creativity was thrown in.. 8/10
Foreign Like Scion..Creativity Compact and Thought Patterns Are Wack..
So Wack..You've Been Compared To Some Of Vanilla Ice's Tracks!!..
No fuckin way did you just stoop to a Vanilla Ice punch.. 1/10
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..
Not worded very well, concept was half way decent, but the punch didnt connect very hard.. 4/10

Overall - 29/60

Vote - R-Rated.. For the better overall verse..

And Ambient.. dont even bitch like you have every other time ive voted against you.. I dont even like R-Rated, but you fuckin lost this.. Almost all of ur shit was played to hell, so dont even say nothin.

R-Rated i peeped ya battles... seriously, kid you got me laughin'
claim u a "dreamcast throwback" s'right, since they went outta fashion
decent 4
u aint making' money OUT of this...frankly u'll just be OUT...... joy!!!
But since u'll be throwing one in this battle... u can be my towel boy
also decent 5
see, im not totally heartless.... until a take the blade to ya chest
kid u spell newby........... ~.::i mean just look-at your check::.~
decent personal 5
sigs says ur gonna freeze me... guess jack frost is gettin' played
chuz any punch u throw.............. was pulled outta the ice age
nice 7
C’mon i think a lot of elevations in order...am bein honest friend
Your number 3 in the tourney?...I guess they rated u from 1 to 10
nice7
vet who?... this herb got RV picking up leaves after he's posted
"The True Vet Is Back!!!".... it's a fuckin' shame nobodys noticed
nice7
blah... post early.
35/60

I Snap Corpse, Call Me The Heart Breaker Get Rocked Like Pat Benetar..
With Punches That Hit So Hard To Knock Ya Jaw Like The Guy In Your Avatar..
nice.....nice multies 6
You No Thug, Only Time You Gang-Bang Is When Elton Starting An Orgy..
Quote It From Your Mouth, Comment To Your Punches.."You All Bore Me"..
decent 6
Each Bar Had The Same Concept..Those Fake Punches Can't Harm Me..
You Ass..Hit With Lyrical Uppercuts..Only Time Your Mind Above Body..
nice personal...8
My Konetic Force Will Transfuze Your Elect-Wrongs Back Into Ions..
Your Styles So Old..Come On Kid Bout Time To Let By Gones Be By Gones..
multies...attempt at wordplay6
Foreign Like Scion..Creativity Compact and Thought Patterns Are Wack..
So Wack..You've Been Compared To Some Of Vanilla Ice's Tracks!!..
decent 4
I Snap Backs!..Leaving Your Body Ad-J-Sent Like Christ's Nazarous..
Repeat The LL...And Give Your Ass A 2nd Round KO Like Cannibus..
forced wordplay...but overall was decent 6
36/60

v/r-rated.........

Votes tied at 4. I will cast the deciding vote.