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Brydon 09-11-07 05:54 PM

pray for better accomadation
 
why am i the 1 in question? i feel i dont deserve this tention,
all i can do is wait for god to mention..........
i guess i chose this life,
jus wish she didnt stab me with that fuckin knife.
im now out here on my own,
cant help but feel that feeling of being dis-owned.
i dont ask for much,
this world got me feeling outa touch.
i dont mind not knowing my dad,
i jus want my own pad.
to relax + play poker,
so god please give me that chance and il show ya!
even tho i dont really know ya,i'l owe ya!!!
all i do is write my life away or am i signing my life away?
day 2 day, am i going the right way?
well i feel this is my own way of how people pray.
so please god please now have ur say and give me that sun ray,
my say...........

wiley d 09-12-07 12:04 PM

i was feeling it,sounds like something i would write

leave feed on mines

trying to innovate myself-doing me wiley d

KM 09-13-07 08:44 PM

ehh not bad kind of off when reading....but for the most part u stayed on subject....work with what u got but keep elevating.....~1~

10-11-07 12:48 PM

You have 3 Days To Post 1 Or More Links In Order To Keep This Open Mic Open, According To New Rules. Do So Or This Will Be Closed & Moved.

10-14-07 06:23 AM

Closed, Moved And Stored.


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