COM 4-4 vs Dimense 4-2
 

Rules:
Check in and agree on line amount
Regular League Rules apply
Verses are due Friday 12:00pm CT
Must have post 3 links to votes in your check-in post
For ever link you are missing you get docked a vote
Matches will be closed Sunday night.

Have fun.

check,,, 10 lines?

edit: when is check in deadline?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...837#post1090837

WILL EDIT IN WHEN HE DROPS TO AVOID FEEDING

10 lines or so ..
ill get at this in a bit
GL

how long does it take to write 10 lines???

i'll drop it here so its not in an edited post.......


Made it into the league... your class aint heavy.. you're lame
The only place you aint light's.. the first three letters of ya name!
Dim better give me all he's got... coz I don't like jealous kids
His reputation is in-tense... coz they say was instead of is!
But his style's getting old... in a home, drinking tea while
He tries to focus on Com... but dimense-sure that he's seen-Aisle!
His style is barbaric...he lives in shit and piss.. he stinks
Clint's allready docked a vote... coz Dim's the missing link!
He appears quite bright... but then he opens his mouth
But what can I say?.....

light is faster than sound!

Stop Bitchin ^ i have alot of other shit to worry bout then a 10 lines...

I Told you I’d Post Wack..b/t still This Gay Pouts
Y Try?..Ur Verse is Like Baseball..Always Play’d Out
Without Doubt..U were Cut ..Don’t Whine about it Friend
We Didn’t need U..We Already Have a Bitch in Wits End
Not to Offend..b/t with verses like that..Fuck Joinin Origin-Ill
U can Scribble over ur Last Writez ..Nd still couldn’t kill at ur own Will
Ur a joke..Still!..Unwanted..so u came up with the Com Crew?
Im not Surprised..Except for Simile’s..Nobody LIKES you
Quit Sulkin..im Speechless..wastin 10 lines on ur Weak Text
Fuckin Whiner ..I’ll End ya Battle Cry..With a Kleenex

COM Had A Couple Of Nice Lines...But Nothing Really Stood Out For Me...Had Some Nice Concepts In Mind, But The Wording On Them Could Have Been Much Better.

Dimense Had A Decent Verse...Punches Were On Point, There Were A Few Quotables In Ya Verse. But Dimense Takes This Wit Better Punches And Written Verse.

Vote - Dimense

not bad from Com but basically Dimense came wit more wittier punches and better
wordplay....he stayed wit it also...

v-Dimense

Ok battle
Both came decent and everythiing was pretty close
but this bar took it for dimense

Quit Sulkin..im Speechless..wastin 10 lines on ur Weak Text
Fuckin Whiner ..I’ll End ya Battle Cry..With a Kleenex

Because of slightly more wit, consistency and better punches

Vote - Dimense

I have to agree with everyone here.

Dimense took this. Better punches and wordplay. Also the personals hit harder. COM you had a decent verse just didn't contend with what Dimense put out there man.

Vote- Dimense

Not in tha League .. ur vote cant count bro ^
but thanks

lmao at Dimense say'n Quo can't vote

.........he kind of runs the league Dim

Not a bad battle...to be straight up though. I thought Dimense killed it. COM didn't come too bad, but Dimense had a couple real nice lines in there. One or two that got me to actually chuckle out loud. Both came decent, Dimense just had the better overall verse pretty much in every category, he took it.

Vote ~ Dimense

An averaged battle by some (ij) but the realness is on the fuckin way kidz.

\\ Hi, kidz do u like violence
\\wanna see me stick a k15 to their throat so they can find eternal silence?

No one greater than me